| "Holding Them" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 00:50 CST
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So sweet! I almost cried there.. oh! you are an exelent writer!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: November 30, 2006 00:06 CST
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wonderful, sweet, compassionate. capturing that indescribable feeling that parents try to explain to others when they hold their children for the first time. warmth for a chilly evening.
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Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really should be proud of this. It's beautiful. Really well done and I think you captured Inuyasha's personality in a situation like this perfectly. This is just lovely and truly touching.
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Reviewed By: UsakoSerenity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is beautiful, no other words can describe it. You have every right to be proud. Any woman who reads this will sigh and want to be a mother and every mother will look at her kids and agree :)
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