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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 03:04 CDT
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VERY interesting new world situation you have created! Nice! Loved the introduction of Kikyou as Kagome's older sister. And she killed Inuyasha's mate and children? Love the way you're bringing INU into the story, too. Was he dallying with her? Well, at least Souta is getting some fluff. Um, Hiei spent two days with Kikyo thinking she was his mate? Ew, I really don't like that. How the heck could that be? Even if they looked exactly alike, he should have been able to recognize his mate. Heck, if they slept together once, he'd know -- no two women are alike in bed. And now Inuyasha is going to try to kill Kagome thinking she's Kikyou? Maybe he'll fall in love with her instead. Heck, someone has to spend some time with her. Her mate, who was unfaithful and hasn't fessed up to it, who was kept from her for so long, can't sit around and help name their children? Throw him back. LOL!! (Sorry, I'm just not getting any feeling for them caring for each other yet.) Seems he'd be more likely to be smotheringly close after losing her once already. He showed more feeling for his son's growing romance than for his own. Can't believe he helped him out like that, since it means taking in a human girl. I liked the little line dropped that told about Kurama meeting with them periodically. Love the whole 'safe houses' premise. So, Kikyou and Takeshi are trying to get Kagome killed? What would they gain by that? Lots of stuff going on in this chapter. Can't wait to find out some of the answers!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon....loved the chapter cant wait...
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohh very nice pdate soon please
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Reviewed By: perfectlittlegirl(offline) On: March 23, 2007 01:07 CDT
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ur story is great! please continue it! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 20:58 CDT
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Very interesting. So, Naraku has provided demons with access to the Ningenkai, -- wonder what his game is? And Takeshi is Kagome's father, right? Apparently, Hiei and his clan have an idea of what is going on, though. Wonder what they plan to do? I like it that Hiei sent Miroku to make sure Kurama's mother was safe. That was a great gesture to an old friend. The plot thickens!
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 19:38 CDT
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i liked this chapter Update soon
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 15:23 CDT
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i love it update soon please
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 01:34 CDT
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Yay! Another chapter! You're really doing a lot of writing. Again: yay! I liked that one, too. I like the way Yusuke brazenly lied to her. And I really like Miroku as a lecherous fire demon. I can't believe Hiei just turned his back on his contract like that. Won't the Reikai send people after him? (Like his friends?) He could be locked up or executed for breaking that contract, couldn't he? I like it that Kurama told the other two who Kagome and Souta are. And now that they've reunited with Sango and Miroku, maybe Hiei and Kagome can actually spend a little time together. Of course, trouble and danger are lurking right outside... Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 19, 2007 00:06 CDT
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What will happen once they report to Koenma? Does Konema awre of Hiei's family, other then Yukina? Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon./..
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 16, 2007 22:43 CDT
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Very interesting. Would Kagome stop the fighting? Why are Sango and Hiei fighting? How will the SD react when they find out about Kagome and Hiei? What happened to Kagome in the woods? Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 15:01 CDT
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Veeery interesting chapter! You're playing this one close to the chest -- raising more questions, and keeping a tight lid on the answers. I like the idea of Sango and Miroku being part of things in this way. I can't wait to find out exactly why Sango is so mad at Hiei -- I caught a little of it, but not really the whole picture, I think. Does Sango realize Kagome is there? Or has she been too wrapped up in her anger to sense her? Is Kagome going to introduce herself to the detectives? I would think she would at least demand to know who they are, considering they are in her home. You have really been doing a lot of writing the past few days. (Yay!) I'm following your stories and watching anxiously for more of them!
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Reviewed By: blackXangelX101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love love love ur fic so much i cant wait until u update again
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Reviewed By: Chickenfingers On: March 10, 2007 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awsome, please keep writing. ASAP keep writing please!!!
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Reviewed By: VB On: March 08, 2007 00:40 CST
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THAT WASN'T A REAL CHAPTER!! I hate you! That long long wait and then the excitement of a new chapter only for my hopes and dreams to be dashed by your sadistic evil! Oh cruel fate! *faints*..........Feel miserable yet?...Well enough of that update soon I really want to know what happened.
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