| "When Tezuka Had Fallen For Her" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Title: good
Reviewed By: dawn m [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work? sounds kind of lame for how much i am enjoying this series and hoping to keep reading more of your work. i thank you for a very fine read i am looking forward to more of this story.
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Reviewed By: Raluca On: June 19, 2007 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story! I am really glad I found a story that had Tezuka Kunimitsu in it and I congradulate you for it, it really is a chalenge considering Tezuka-kun is a difficult character to write a fic with. But it really turned out really great. DO NOT STOP!!! The story is original and extremely entertaining from my point of view and you captured Tezuka's character and essenece really well. POT is one of my favourite anime because it has so many complex characters and also tennis is my no1 sport. as someone who plays tennis I think the description of the match between Ringo and that senior girl(chapter 12 I believe I can't remember her name gomen nasai)was awsome as surreal as it was. The ballerina ideea was brilliant ^.^ Also your use of Japanese is really cool, I just love that language, glad I'm learning it. Ok I'll finish now, It's kind of a long review, but it's a bad habit...^^. Good luck with the story I can't wait for some romantic moments between Tezuka and Ringo, but take your time and don't rush it, write them when you feel like it. Well that's about it. Good job with this story, honestly. Mata ne.
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Title: Nice job!
Reviewed By: Chokocat On: June 19, 2007 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"The skies turned gray and the ground shook, and thunder growled from overhead, the fork of lightning illuminating their faces." hahahahaha that part is sooo funny!!!!! Well anyways, the story is great soo far. Update soon, kay? & huggs & kisses!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 17:36 EDT
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All the love and happiness is finally starting! I'm so excited. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. And who the heck is calling her?! I really hope you can post the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: darkkittymusic On: June 08, 2007 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story, very well written and interesting. Plz update whne you get the chance.
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 16:24 EDT
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That was such a good chapter. I'm so curious about what's up with what Tezuka told her to do. The whole thing with Ringo in her towel was so funny. If it had been any of the other regulars in the situation, then it wouldn't be nearly as funny, but with Tezuka it is hilarious. I hope you get the time to post the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 14:08 EDT
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Right Tezuka, she's not your girlfriend...yet. That was a really good chapter. Tezuka carrying Ringo was so cute, especially when she wouldn't let him put her down. I hope you can post the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 18:21 EDT
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That was really awesome. I can just feel Ringo smirking on the inside, but she's too nice and modest to be all cocky when everyone thinks she's gonna lose. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wanna see Ringo kick some stuck up senior butt.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: dawnmm On: May 31, 2007 10:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
definately good characterizations really like the way this is going keep it up
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 16:06 EDT
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YAY! I can't wait for Ringo to play. I knew she wouldn't just let Tomoka and Sakuno get picked on like that. I hope you can post the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 17:48 EDT
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GASP! What will Ringo do?! I really hope she joins the club. I want her to play tennis again. I love Aiko and Kippei, they're so cute. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 11:26 EDT
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That was great! I love that Ringo can kick some butt, but she seems to be a bit emotionally messed up. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next, I hope Ringo gets back into tennis.
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Reviewed By: super_burnin_DD [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 20:33 EDT
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HI! Look, I really want you to continue your story! It's so good, I really love the realism you put in the characters because, they really are as you describe them...I like Ringo and how she is...how can I say...Kinda punk wihtout being weird...Anyway! I love how you write your fanfic and I really really want you to go on!! Super_burnin_DD
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 18:53 EDT
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Act vi was really good, please don't stop posting! I really want to read more and see Tezuka start to loosen up a bit. I like that you made them neighbors, it's a good way to make them closer. Hope you can post again soon.
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 23:06 EDT
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Another great chapter! We're really getting into the good stuff now. And so the love begins. I hope you can post the next act soonish!
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