| "Prisoner of War: Akai" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ♡ your fanfic On: July 19, 2018 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please continue! Your book is amazing and super super
interesting!
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Reviewed By: ♡ your fanfic On: July 19, 2018 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please continue! Your book is amazing and super super
interesting!
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Reviewed By: ♡ your fanfic On: July 19, 2018 16:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please continue! Your book is amazing and super super
interesting!
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Reviewed By: darkmistress in the shadows On: April 09, 2007 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the reason why you're not keeping this up is because...? Okay, bad things first: I didn't understand sometimes when they were saying things b/c of the style of writing. Example: "What did you say?""Nothing." That sort of thing. B/c I couldn't see the quotes very well when they are like that. Just press enter when you are doing the speech and I bet more people will understand. But your story is very creative. Usually, when people write about Zutara, it's always Zuko captures Katara and they end up together. I like how you made Zuko the prisoner this time. Very nice. Oh, and hurry up on the update.
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