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 Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 19, 2002 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THERE WASNT A BIT OF LEMON IN THERE IT WAS ALL IMPLYED:@ *Has sad cibi pout* your*sniffle* so mean *lil waterfall tears can be seen on face*

still pouting over the good story ending like that,
~*~Dark Princess~*~
 Reviewed By: Squall-sama  On: December 04, 2002 14:02 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
to say the least, i was bursting with tears of laughter. but when i saw this outrageously hillarious fic taken down from the hell known as FF.net, i was bursting with tears of sadness and hate for the bastards there--needless to say, they did the same thing to me--only my WHOLE profile was deleted. i've come upon many authors here at MM.org who have said the same thing about their stories or their whole profile (like myself) being taken down and not getting any replies to their e-mails asking why it happened. in my opinion, i wouldn't even bother waiting for a reply because, from what i've seen happen to all the wonderful authors here--such as yourself--the *sucks up evil comment* not very nice people at ff.net will not reply...its sad, but true--i myself wrote them a not so nice e-mail when i found myself deleted...but you know...

anyway, sorry 'bout that, i'm just glad i was able to find you again and finish this fic--i haven't a laugh like that in a VERY long time, and well laughter can be a good thing i guess and you're awsome at making it happen, thanks.
 Reviewed By: melly  On: November 30, 2002 19:47 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I simply love this story!!!! I hope there are more epilogues to come ^_^
 Reviewed By: Moonsliver [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 22, 2002 20:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn...intials just *really* don't work for this one, do they? *mutters* And here's were my first attempt got cut off. quirky HTML...

Oh well...

Yes, I decided to read it here because of the other...problem. *won't go into it* As you already know, I've loved this fic from start to finish, and the epilogue holds promise. Poor Trowa -- in the same room with *both* horny blondes. Whatever will he do...? XD

And the way you make fun of the rating ruling. *smirks*

So, do Heero and Duo get an Epilouge? How about Treize and his China doll? *impish grin* Come on -- please? *bats eyelashes*

(And just in case this doesn't sign me and...me...*mutters* >_
 Reviewed By: Moonsliver [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 22, 2002 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn...intials just *really* don't work for this one, do they? >__
 Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 21, 2002 15:03 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Myahhhhh! This story is justt he best! C'mon, you've gottsta update!!!!!^^ Damn FF.net..i hate that new rule >(
 Reviewed By: Nozomi  On: November 17, 2002 20:01 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
God I luv u girl. ur such an awesome, versatile author!!!!! and every bit of this fic has been absolutely hilarious!!!
 Reviewed By: Michalyn [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 01:02 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wonderful and hilarious as usual. Quatre's and Zechs' antics are to die for ^_^! A "foppish" Zechs is totally unexpected - but surprisingly, delightfuly entertaining. More please? And can we see more of Treize and his Dragon? Ja!
 Reviewed By: Moon Faery  On: November 14, 2002 21:36 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
//twitch// I can't believe you did that... That ending was just WAY too cruel! It was positively inhumane! x-x You didn't even resolve the argument! You are... EVIL!!!!!!!! Please, please, please write a sequel! Maybe even a lemony one? Something? You can't just leave use hanging like this!
~*~Moon Faery~*~
 Reviewed By: Datiye  On: November 12, 2002 14:04 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am really beging to like this fic. I am only up to chapter three but the plot is very gripping. I am speng a good portion of my free time reading it. I noticed from what you say in chapter three that you agree with many other people as well as my self that criticism can be good in a reveiw but at this point in time I have to criticise you about.
 Reviewed By: Cori  On: November 03, 2002 23:55 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heh, I love it. I hope you continue soon.
 Reviewed By: Somebody Else [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 25, 2002 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Somebody Else: I can't really give you anything constructive in this. It's wonderful, but you should have allready known that. It's kind of obvious. Uhm... I desperately await the next chapter and this will go on my favorites list. I guess since I can't point out anything you need to improve on I guess I'll just tell you my favorite things. I liked the way you lightened the atmosphere with mentions of fic cliches (Panda Bear really does suit him better) and the whole tree- god thing was funny. Oh, and the realism with the mentions of condoms and all... I really do think more people should put that in. Also, I liked...well everything. This will take forever if I name all my favorite parts. I'd have to rewrite the whole fic. OH! I just thought of something... but I guess that it's not really important but none the less, Treize likes to take rose-scented baths so he would probably have a faint smell of roses. I don't help at all, do I? Ah well, If you ever feel insecure in your abilities as a writer (and I can't see why you would) feel free to contact me. Or anyone else who's read this. Your ego is hard not to pet.

Angel: IT'S JUST SO CUDDLY!!

Somebody Else: O.o' riiiiiiiggggght.... blonds can be wierd. This review is unneccesarily long and rambling. Sorry for puting it there for you to read, but what the hell I tried to be helpful. I did! Really! And I you should at least know that I took the time to read all 9 chapters and I liked it.

Kali: And let's see some action! like panda and his daddy action!!

Somebody Else: O.o' sorry... I'll go lock them in the closet now...
 Reviewed By: Tachara  On: October 05, 2002 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was *such* an awesome fic!!!! The only thing I can think of was that the group session (hehe...) got a little dull in there. *Love* the Lets-torture-Wufei moments though!! hope you keep writing!!!!
 Reviewed By: KuriQuinn  On: September 21, 2002 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very great fic tw---three thumbs, way way up! *looks confused* Where'd I get three thumbs from?
Anyway, you're style and originailty are exceptional and I'm betting my life that this fic is only going to get better.
By the way, sorry for getting you so ticked about me persisting..I just had to confirm that I could finish reading..
keep it up,
KuriQuinn
 Reviewed By: Jade Indigo  On: September 16, 2002 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well I don't know if you are writing on it any longer...but I just got to read it all...You are a good writer. I saw a few grammer errors but not much at all really. Umm...I didn't get a very good image of the area around them and things but other then that, I love it. And yes, the poor poor door. But hey what better then to be crushed by two of the cutest Gundam pilots around?! ^_^;
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