| "+To Be Deceived+" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: +to be deceived+
Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
come on i relly need to know what happedns next up date soon pls pls pls pls k bye
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't know what that move is called but, I refered to it as the Moon Orb Rasengan. Kinda like the Odama Rasengan and the Lunar Rasengan mixed. Somehow I think that Orochimaru has one more ace up his sleeve. Can't wait for this next chapter.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was really good!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I REALLY WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!! U ROCK!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chap! well UPDATE SOON!!! I REALLY WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!! UR AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naruto pwns, I'm glad you're still working on this. Most of the other stories I read stop somewhere in the middle. I'm glad that you posted this I needed a pick me up today.
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 00:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I see what you ment by me being "close" I love the twist keep up. I must admit I didn't see that coming and that's why you rock!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i did not see that coming! that was such an unexpected twist!! I LOVED IT!! SO UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! I REALLY WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!! UR AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dan dan dan dan!!! what's ganna happen next?! i'm in suspenes! well PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT WOOT I predicted it ten points for JJ. I want more. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chap i really liked it!!! well UPDATE SOON!!! U ROCK!!
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn these cliffhangers. I really want to know what happens next. But you know how to tease a guy. Good job.
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Title: srry
Reviewed By: Inuchick101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 15:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I had a little problem with my computor and it underlined my entire chapter for one reason or another... srry bout that!
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Reviewed By: Incredulity On: November 08, 2007 07:53 CST
Comment/Review:
It's obvious Sasuke is the new Hokage. And why the hell is your entire fic underlined? There's absolutely no reason for it to be underlined.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL!!! i really like this fic! it's really good!!! wel UPDATE SOON!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!
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Title: Update soon.
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I just figured it out and that would be completely foul if I'm right but,......Is Sasuke the new Hokage. You don't have to answer now but, I do want to know what happens next.
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