| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 10:28 CST
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Amazingamazingamazing story!!! I can almost see how the paradox clicks into place. I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome get back together. They're so cute together. ;D Great fic, nicely written and a cliché-plot-turned-original. ^-^ Update soon! Soonsoonsoonsoon!!!
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Reviewed By: geisha120000 On: January 11, 2008 10:24 CST
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Oh I hope Inu/Kag get back together! Its heartbraking to see them like this Great fic!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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and i think i'm seeing the importance of chapter one now with the other chapters... i have a guess but i'll wait and see how everything turns out... until the next update...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 04:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... ok i think i follow now... in your new chapter the 4th one... it connects with the 2nd & 3rd... and it seems that kagome will meet inuyasha in the meeting... will she recognize inuyasha & sesshoumaru... wonder what the reactions will be... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 17:36 CST
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You know, I was thinking about what K's mom said. Kagome did leave him, in a sense. She promised two years and then extended it, without going back to explain to IY. So she did abandon him, can't blame him for his anger and lack of trust. Seems like IY was opening up to her, admitting he wanted her with him, or that he would follow her. Either way, he wanted to be with her. Was it fear that made her go? Or something else? Surely she's not so naive as to believe her own story. "Secure their future"? Sounds like an excuse to me.... K's got a lot of work ahead of her, methinks, to make things right.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 17:31 CST
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Love this! Nice emotional depth and pacing. Good to see them maturing, and I can't wait to see how you turn this out!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good updates... ok so chapter 2 went into a flashback of one month before the first chapter?... what about chapter 3 is that a continuation of chapter 2 or chapter 1?... is kazuki the one kagome is marrying in chapter 1?... what happened to the jewel?... was there a wish?... what about inuyasha?... sorry for the many questions still confusing to me... glad that it's an inu/kag pairing though... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... but very sad... is this an inuyasha/kagome pairing... and also about the beginning just one question: WHY?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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