| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2012 16:14 PST
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So I read this chapter while doing my laundry at the laundrymat and I was freaking out at my phone lol of course he finally tells her he's not human and she's asleep. And it takes a fever for her to admit to anything. Anyway I can not wait for the next chapter :) |
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2012 15:08 PST
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Very sweet chapter...yes we are getting somewhere. I hope she doesn't deny him when she's feeling better. I'm interested to know what her reaction will be to Evans secret. Gosh I wish it were Monday now lil ni one likes Monday's but new chapters give me something to look forward to. |
Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2012 22:53 PST
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Fantastic keep 'em coming! |
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 16:14 PST
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Aww he didn't save all the lobsters lol that's a really cool birthday present that she found, and him being a huge music nerd of course he would love it. And the kiss was amazing :) |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 08:32 PST
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What a wonderful birthday. A bonfire, lobsters, whipping cream, beefcake, birthday cake, and the "Sex Pistols". I want you to plan my next birthday party, OK? LOL Wonderful chapter...she left Marvin by the wayside to celebrate Even's birthday. She knows whats important, doesn't she. Thank you sue |
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 08:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was such a sweet chapter! Yay for fire lite kisses! Evan is such a kid |
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 08:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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:3 Love these two! Come on V give the man a try! Marvin has gots to go! |
Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 08:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the well wishes! :) I'm happy about the kiss, Val didn't freak out. I'm also happy that she didn't fret over the realization that the boundary between friends and something more is becoming more distorted with each interaction. Abd the present was perfect, I wonder just how much she spent. I wish she drops Marvin before she does something she regrets. Like actually marrying him. |
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 04:59 PST
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Awe that was sweet. I'm anxious for her to dump Marvin because he's beyond lame and more self centered than she realizes. I'm also interested for you to delve more into Evan's relationship with Cain and Bas. Its really interesting and I think its a serious issue for Evan and something that defines his character's thinking. Are you going ti go into that. Because we've seen a lot of valeries issues dealt with maybe not all but this is also Evans story and I wanna know what's goin on with him deep down ya know. Well cant wait to read more. When this is finally done. I'm gonna download the Pdt to my kindle. I love rereading all of your stories. They never get old. My favorites are purity. 1,3, and 4 so far. And morios. |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2012 22:55 PDT
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Definitely the best present ever. And the record isn't too bad either. It'll be hard to follow up next year. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2012 10:09 PDT
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I KNEW IT. I knew in the last chapter that Marvin would pop up. It all worked out though. It took me a sec to figure out what the lobsters were all about, I'd forgotten Val's noble cause lol. Great chapters, I'm happy you're back! :) And thanks for the well wishes in regards to the storm, I seriously got lucky, my block is the only one around in about a 4 block radius with power :( |
Reviewed By: x siesie x [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2012 17:18 PDT
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Come on V! If you forget about someone so easily, then you shouldn't be with them, regardless of your fears! |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2012 15:22 PDT
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The birthday celebration was perfect. :) They are my favorite the way they interact. And now I find myself wanting to drive around the country releasing balloons... |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2012 00:14 PDT
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That was nice. Not exactly what she had planned, but nice nonetheless. I wonder what Valerie had planned in the first place, and will they still be doing them on the promised 'date' day? Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2012 23:30 PDT
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WOW! Bitches is REALLY in for a surprise! So is Maddy, and Bas. I bet this one is going to come back to bite Evan hard in the behind. Here I was, coming back to re-read some chapters, because I've been re-reweading the story to pass the time, and find another chapter, fresh off the keyboard! Thanks! ^_^ Also, I hope that voice of self-doubt in Valerie's mind speaks LOUDER! |
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