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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 20:16 EST
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omg...that was hilarious!!:) I totally died laughing especially the part where Ichigo bit her and showed that he marked her to the entire restaurant!!:) Great job and can't wait to see more!!:)
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 03:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love, love, love, love this! It's super funny. I love your possessive Ichigo and your trying-to-be-cool-but-so-cutely-failing Rukia. Wonderful read. This needs a sequel :-) Your Safe Sex series is a joy. I'm glad you have another series going on because I've read (and re-read) all your fics and I've been looking forward to more from you. Keep writing!
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Title: 2nd chapter
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 11:40 EST
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That's right Rukia... get yours and throw him under the bus!!! That was so funny! I love how you make them interact with each other. I'm off to read your lastest, laters!
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 10:30 EST
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my my, we have such a fiesty, cute couple in here! actually its Ichigo's fault if you ask me, no woman should wait 50 freaking years for a guy to kiss her...its long, damn long!and If I am not mistken it took another 50 years to have sex(I had actually only gotten the gall to kiss her about fifty years after I became a permanent resident of the Soul Society and it took me another fifty years to actually get enough courage to get inside of her pants.)..If I were Rukia I would go insane...come on what kind of prudish ideas do you have to keep on 50 YEARS without getting it! Geez that guy sometimes is a pain in the ass and Rukia seems like an angel after these, she is so patient, so gracious, she is...well a goddess(because no human or shinigami could have gone through that). Cheers and cookies! See you in next chapter;)
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Title: 1st Chapter
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 08:21 EST
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Wonderful start! I love how you make these two fight and... you know what I mean. @_@ What's so weird about this chapter is I got a notification about it, and I thought it was from another arthor that writes male/male fanfics, and I don't read that stuff. So just yesterday I found another update on your story and was pleasantly pleased that it came from you. I'm off to read the rest, a ture treat for my week I must say. Laters!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 02:26 EST
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That was so funny! I laughed so hard my mother thought I was crazy. It is so Ichigo/Rukia...I could see him doing something like that to her and I can see her reacting the way she did. It was indeed CLASSIC. He bit her, she kicked him hard, didn't speak to him for six months and still didn't date anyone else. I guess his marking her worked...you think? I can't wait to read your next one shot. You do humor well...But of course it's you...you would write 'how to' instructions and it would be wonderful reading. Great job.
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Title: OMFGLIEKWHOA.
Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEST. CHAPTER. EVER!!! OOOOhmyGAWD, that ENTIRE scene with Rukia and Ichigo in the restaurant was.....like, the best IchiRuki scene, EVER, that you've written, at least; oh, yeah, except for that entire cop/detective story you wrote, which was the absolutely STEAMIEST IchiRuki story made EVER by ANYBODY, as far as I'm concerned, but this scene in this chapter.....yeah. I've read you for a long time, and this scene is IchiRuki CLASSIC. (Utterly great chapter, and I'm a fan of yours; just in case you didn't catch that, I might've been too subtle, lol)
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 01:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good! thats all I really have to say...
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Title: just getting more awesome
Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 00:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you get any better, you'll be nothing short of a god. and perfect timing, too! its birthday! *does jig* thanks so much for writing.
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 08:24 EST
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HE DESERVED THAT! my my, such a stupid bastard *grins evilly* I believe the next chapter will be the torture of Ichigo in more than one ways...Rukia is such a clever and sly woman=] you should keep writing this one too, that keeps us entertained while waiting for the infamous 'she will be loved' cheers and cookies!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 07:27 EST
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These are so good....She left him high, dry and bound...that was soooo funny. Your first installment...I have to agree with akirk85029 I wonder how Byakuya feels about everyone knowing when his sister and Ichigo are being intimate. That would be funny to hear his thought...you know like 'Oh my god there at it again...could they be anymore discreet.' But you know...If truth be told he would probably be just a kinky as they are if he had a woman....you know, you've given me an idea. I love to write Byakuya FanFics...they may not be as great as your stories, however, there is nothing like a story depicting Byakuya Kuchiki trying to hide the fact he's having kinky sex with random female shinigami. That's funny. Anyway...sorry for going off on that tangent...Great Job, please do more installments.
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Reviewed By: alchemist1203 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 22:50 EST
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I was smiling too much as I read this story. It was funny and the smex is hot. I love IchiRuki, and it's great to know that after being together for such a long time, they still have the hots for each other. Anyway, I hope you write more one-shots like this one.
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 10:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!!!! I love this. It would make an awesome long fic. Taking place 150 years in the future and all, it's a cool way of going 'what if this happen'. If you have another whim to continue this, I know I won't be disappointed. (Not that I ever am ;>)
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Title: YES
Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 17:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it possible to suade your whim at all, then KEEP WRITNG! this was definetly a change in your writing style, and in my opinion could evolve into one of your best, if it is possible to actually have a best among your legendary fics.
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 15:16 EST
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Really great one-shot!!:) When you were talking about everyone knowing when they had sex it only made me think of Byakuya - I wonder what kind of looks he got when everyone knows when his sister was having sex!!:) Too funny!!:) I wonder if anyone would be brave enough to make a joke at him!!:) I love this pairing though!! IchiRuki always!!:)
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