| "Faith of Wicca" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anzu On: July 09, 2002 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
er...I have too many windows up so I can only read half of a chapter...I'll read more soon! ^^
keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: aaaaaaarrrrrrrghhhhhhhhh On: July 08, 2002 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SETO"S RULES.he's quiet,serious,hot,sexy,smart,caring....
i agree with you that joey is annoying. he always put his butt in where it doesn't belong.
and tea too.b/c she talks too much about friendship craps.
oops...i'm supposed to be mad at you for giving kaiba a girlfriend, not bashing joey and tea
KAIBA"S MINE!! MINE MINE MINE MINE! |
Reviewed By: Lady Kaiba On: July 06, 2002 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have a crush on Seto Kaiba too.^-^.btw i loved your fanfic *gives it 6 thumbs up* ^-^ |
Reviewed By: great On: July 06, 2002 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
ur story is awesome. and kaiba is so *sigh* .....
too bad he's real. |
Reviewed By: krista annahan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is excellent! keep up the good work
KAIBA RULES! |
Reviewed By: Kvaedi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 03:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very very Mary Sue. *sigh*
No, can't say I'm a Sue fan (I had no idea such creatures as Mary Sue FANS existed!), but I read it anyway. =P Which means that I didn't like it much, but that's not to say it's a bad story. Bit cliche, but actually pretty darn good, for what it is!
If I may make one suggestion, I would say not to put so many author's notes and disclaimers right in the middle of the story. You don't need to do that! They're distracting! Stick them at the beginning or the end if you're worried that someone will accuse you of plagiarism.
And maybe...you have enough OCs to fuel your own series. Why not do that? Then you could publish your work and make millions. (I get told that a lot. This is the obligatory "passing it on.")
Other than that, keep writing! =D |
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