| "Smile Because It Happened" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 09:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 08:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the prologue it was great. |
Reviewed By: Fantasma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 19:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I really enjoyed your story. There were certain times when I felt the dynamics were a little kitschy, but by the end of every chapter I was completely enthralled. Your character dialect was amazingly perfect, even when the characters were in situations that seemed rather OOC, the dialogue was VERY convincing. I was hooked after the 3rd chapter, and finished the entire story in about 2 days. I found myself reading it at every opportunity I had. Kudos kudos kudos.
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Reviewed By: MayFeiScarlette On: December 17, 2009 22:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love happy endings and I really enjoyed you story, thank you so much!! It was pure greatness! I would love to see some fanart of the whole gang with their ever growing families.
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Reviewed By: cady18 On: August 08, 2009 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story! amazing way to tie everything up. now i wanna draw fanart of all the little kids! x)
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Reviewed By: ClaireAlbright On: July 21, 2009 08:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
After I finished watching Avatar, there was a hole in my heart. I dont know if it was the loose ends, the lack of seasons or the fact that i will never have a love like the one aang and katara had but after reading this - my hole is filled. my heart can move on. i appreciate that so much. i never knew what people were talking about when they said avatar will live on through fan fiction. i do now. thank you for bringing closure to an epic journey. smile because it happened, indeed.
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Title: All time
Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol wow. This was amazing. The whole story came together lovely, and the epilogue made me smile :]. Awesome work. Your writing is heart reaching and I will never get this outta my head xD.
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Title: The entire story so far
Reviewed By: rushie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit that this is one of my favourite stories. I love everything in it, I got caught up with so much emotions: Laughter, shocked, regret and happiness. I love how you portrayed all the characters...i love it so much. You need to update more chapters...Check out mine " A Beautiful Lie" it's my first fanfic of Zutara...
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: January 26, 2009 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm in love… I'm only at chapter 15 but I absolutely LOVE this story. I'm in no way an avatar fanfic connoisseur as this is the only one I've ever read but I've read 300+ fanfics of all kinds and I must say that this is one I will defiantly recommend to people if not read again. I have absolutely no idea how this fanfic can have such few reviews but hears one to add. As a said this is the first Avatar fanfic I've ever read and I don't even really watch the anime but I love the way you portray all the different characters. The fact that they don't automatically end up together, like in most stories, I really like. You know the stories where its set up from the beginning that they'll end up together? Ya… you started you story in a way that they're both content with where they are in life. It's only later that that begin to realize its not where they want to be. Well anyways that's all I really have to say for now but I'm sure I'll review again as I get further in the story… Oh and in case its not implied PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY… WRITE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! Kanna
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inurinsama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 13:34 EST
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Now this is what I was waiting for. Awesomeness! Dang, Azula-well at least she had her revelation before doing that. I was like wow. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 00:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omigawd O.O...................... omigawd OoO...................... i did NOT see that coming omigawd :O that was awesome! so much waiting. and u didn't disappoint. i loved that chapter. it was so suspenseful. and attention grabbing. i couldn't stop reading! excellent writing and beautiful story!
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Title: My Months of Waiting
Reviewed By: inurinsama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 09:54 EST
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Okay I've finally gotten around to reviewing-school and stuff... The lemon was great and his fears of creating a child showed how much depth you give your characters. So awesome job. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 04:15 EST
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Holy crap, this story is AWESOME! I'm a fan of avatar, and glanced at this at first out of boredom, but you really did a good job at getting your hook into the reader, and they'll just continue to read it up! It's an incredible story, and a good take on canon, even twisting things to how many Zutara fans feel about the story. I mean, seriously, Zuko with his old squeeze? True, Mai's feeling may not be obvious, but they do show up, probably when they're alone. That's my only real complaint. Still, to me there is something disturbingly wrong about azula. Did something, well, freaky happen to her as a kid? Because the way she acts in canon, it's like she killed her mom, and made her a part f herself. Or worse, she was forced to be the replacement for her mom for Ozai. That particular thought disturbs the hell out of me, but would make sense with how much of an asshole he was. Still, continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters! Very exciting, very cute, and extremely well written!
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