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"The Blue Eyed Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ]
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 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 29, 2009 02:58 CST
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LOL! You just can't keep a kitsune's ego down. Youko has been hilarious in this story. I can't wait to see what Hiei has to say now that he has returned!
 Reviewed By: KB  On: November 28, 2009 07:02 CST
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I would just love to say this. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! though I'm kinda sad it's done. *has had a lack of kag/hiei fanfics lately...*
 Reviewed By: KB  On: September 27, 2009 07:38 CDT
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Maah I can't wait until you update again now! Where'd they go?! I she really preggorz!? If so will they come back when she's not any more?! Did he really take her away because the others!? What will Botan do if Hiei comes back with a KID!? Will Kuwabara feint at the mere thought!? XD
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 27, 2009 01:57 CDT
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Yep! Normal life again and Youko is bored. Always a dangerous thing. The human part of him is just doomed. ^_^
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 27, 2009 01:54 CDT
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Ah! So they're BOTH gone. And presumably expecting a spikey-haired baby. Poor Youko. Methinks he doth protest too much. He's just irritated because now it's going to be boring around there again. And we still have so many unanswered questions! How the heck did those two get together in the first place? Must read your next installment!
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 27, 2009 01:50 CDT
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What? He left AGAIN? LOL! You're killing me here. Love Kurama's thought that it would be painful if Youko tried to tan his OWN hide. LOL!
 Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi  On: September 07, 2009 16:13 CDT
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Shuichi and Kurama are so funny. And they're stuck with one another! XD Nice to know that even if he's far away and somewhat angry at her, Hiei will always come back to protect her. :) Guess he's a jerk to everybody except her. :D I love the way they act with each other. ^^ Love it.
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2009 02:31 CDT
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Woohoo! And once again, you deliver up a satisfying non-lemon. ^_^ You gave us the shivery-smiley-oh yeah! feeling without having to write anything but a name and a snarl. Well-done. And I laughed and laughed over Youko's disappointment in Yusuke. I have to say, I'm disappointed in him, too. *sigh* And now I have to wait until you are able to bless us again with more of this wonderful story. This really is so much fun to read! Thanks for the treat!
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2009 02:22 CDT
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Way to make an entrance, Hiei! Loved the mental image of the window shattering inward as Hiei joined the little group. And he was brought back because he could feel Kagome was upset--nice! He might be angry with her, but that didn't stop him from coming to make sure she was okay. Hiei just assumed Kurama was to blame until he saw the others there, and he still got the brunt of Hiei's anger when Hiei realized Botan had seen Kagome. I giggled when he called her Reikai's dog. I am really enjoying the way this story is unfolding. And we still have so many things to find out! Keep the party going!
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2009 01:54 CDT
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And you must have been reading my mind (Or, more likely, you led my mind exactly where you wanted it since you answered my questions from the last chapter before I asked them. LOL!) And Oooooooo! Botan jealousy! Over Hiei! Didn't see THAT coming. I love it when you surprise me. ^_^ I also love it that Kagome took such quick offense to Botan's words and suggestions that someone would separate her and Hiei. Time for a show of power--think again! Great chapter!
 Reviewed By: madmiko, notsigned in  On: September 06, 2009 01:47 CDT
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Woohoo! New chapter! Is it Christmas? I'm very much looking forward to seeing everyone's reaction to Kagome. I am also wondering how Kurama will introduce her? (And what is she wearing, btw? Does she have clothes there or is she wearing something of Hiei's?) Hiei needs to stop sulking and get home to his woman! Reading on!
 Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi  On: August 01, 2009 23:36 CDT
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I wonder what the little fire demon is up to... Hmmm... Knowing Hiei, Kagome probably ain't gonna like it very much. :P Guess I'll have to wait for you to, oh, I know, UPDATE! :D Love the story. :)
 Reviewed By: KB  On: August 01, 2009 19:30 CDT
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Totally loved this Update!! *wishes I could remember my pw* XD anyway I love how Youko's personality is compared to Kurama's, and LOVE how protective Hiei is.
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2009 04:06 CDT
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Oh, my! Chapter 8 was awesome! Hiei returns! *dun dun dun dun!* And Kurama didn't even notice because he was so taken with Kagome's aura. So, Hiei immediately orders Kagome to "Come here," and she goes and tries to soothe his irritation. That played out perfectly in character to me. Nice job! I would have been just a bit worried when Hiei hustled her back to the room if you hadn't added in that last bit about the fire in her eyes. I'm imagining a bit of a lovers' quarrel is about to take place. Yes? ^_^ This is such a fun piece to read! I am enjoying it so much and I can't wait for your next installment. Thanks for the entertainment!
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2009 03:51 CDT
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Loved chapter 7! Kagome's nervousness and awkwardness was so cute. I give you BIG kudos for having Kurama think "Kagome? What a weird name." Have to run right on to the next chapter!
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