| "Make Me Bad" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Vegeta On: January 13, 2003 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lve this story but when is the next chapter?Please hurry up!I need tot know jhow it will end! |
Reviewed By: Vegetagirl On: November 24, 2002 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry and finish the fanfic i wanna know what happens |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: November 11, 2002 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yipeee!!!
Boy this is getting good! Please you must finish, I'm dying to know if Bulma will actually learn to be bad (and beat the crap out of anyone who doubts her), and also i'd like to know whats going on with the sparks of romance between student and teacher ( Bulma and Vegeta)
So Please hurry and finish! |
Reviewed By: mandy On: October 08, 2002 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story so i gave it a 10 |
Reviewed By: Katsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOoooooooooo!! I love your fanfic! It's great!! Plz write more chapters soon!! I'm waiting @.@ Plz hurry!!! I need to read more!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 10, 2002 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SHORT, BUT GOOD, SO I GUESS THAT MAKES UP THE SHORTNESS. BUT WHO AM I TO TALK? So it's in caps*_o |
Reviewed By: ChinChilla On: September 08, 2002 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! I love this fic! Hurry up and add more chapters!! Vegeta...Peter Pan...That's so funny! Hey, you know what? I'm gonna go outside and practice flying. But, umm...if you don't get another chappy up soon, I'll be stuck levatating...I won't be able to move.... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 06, 2002 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Vegeta told those idiots to shut up. I don't know how can stand them. Anyway, the levitation looked simple enough. Now all Bulma has to learn how to do is move thru the air. I think that'll take a little more effort. Vegeta watched Peter Pan? LOL. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*chuckles* He sure TRIED to put the (future, heh) inlaws in their place. His speech was good and almost believeable ... until he grabbed her had as they exited. *hehehe*
geez louise. If I could learn ONE thing from Vegeta ... it would be to fly. *sigh* Wow ... she's so lucky. :)
O.O damn, they have GOT to stop this kiss and think nothing of it, thing. I mean, I can't believe he kissed her ... though, if I had been in HER shoes ...*smirks* ... he would've been lucky if I hadn't gotten him first! ;) I'm sure he just did it to calm her down, but I think he succeeded more in giving her her "happy thought."
Have you ever seen "Lois and Clark: The New Adventures of Superman?" *giggles* Well, when things got "intimate" or they simply kissed ... they usually ended up floating! :D There's food for thought. ^_~
Keep writing on all your fics ... but especially this one!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woo Hoo, this is so awesome...he's teaching her how to fly and...finding her interesting too. Very fascinating. Keep it up, i wanna read morreee. Morre i tell you mooooorrrreee!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
*powering up* I need more badness!!!!
I just had a shitty conversation and now I want to be bad too! I'm trying to be mad, so I thought, "Hey, I'll read more of 'MakeMeBad' because I need a few lessons!
Of course, *forming a ki ball in her hand* I MIGHT settle for a little sour lemon! *smirks* I suppose a bit of "baaaaad"ness will suffice this time.
^_~ |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 04, 2002 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm ALWAYS late. The emotion is tense, lovely job. Can't wait for the next chapter. Kids have always talked too much. The world needs lot of duck tape... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 02, 2002 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that sucks! No, not the chapter. The fact that Bulma has to give up her room is what I think really stinks. If those assholes want to sleep over they can do it in the back yard -_-. Yeah, I'm Vegetaesque in that department. Can't wait for them to leave, even though Bulma being in Veggie's room might make for some interesting moments ^_^. Good chapter. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2002 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooo, in the same bedroom together, allone. At night. Ooo laaaaaa laaaa!! ^^
CONTINUE SOON!!!!
Will there be some lemonly goodness??? ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: August 31, 2002 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is too funny, 35!! Oh goosh, I gotta calm down. This is great. Update sooner |
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