| "Dragon's Bait" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: IcE_hOpe On: April 05, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is very good and you should continue it. |
Reviewed By: Em On: March 25, 2003 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
um.. yeha............ u need 2 finnish this cuze it is good but i need 2 read it and i want it now..... |
Reviewed By: Em On: March 25, 2003 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
um... yeah u need 2 hurry cuze i like the story and i don't like alot of stories and i wnat u 2 finnsih so i can finnish it |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! PLLLLLLLLEEASE! CONTINUE! *boobo lip* ^^ |
Reviewed By: Fushizen na On: March 21, 2003 15:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Aahhhh!!!
I just found this fic.
I love it!!
The idea is so cool.
You have to update soon!!
Van is so cocky.
I'd like to think I know what's going on but I bet you'll just surprise me later.
*squirms*
This is so good.
Hurry!!! |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: March 21, 2003 09:47 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW. This is realy good. I don't like cliffhangers though they realy bother me. Keep up with the good story. Udate soon please. I look forward to more, that I do.
\\V//
^_^. Love and Peace
SHADY |
Reviewed By: Lev On: February 25, 2003 08:42 CST
Comment/Review:
It's almost been a month since you last updated this. *gets down on knees* Pleeaaaaaaaase write more? |
Reviewed By: Lev On: February 20, 2003 08:38 CST
Comment/Review:
*begs* Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease update? |
Reviewed By: cherryblossom On: January 29, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story because it is so differnt. i can't wait to read more! this is one of the better fanfics i've read and i've read some good ones. |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ! *gasp* Update! |
Reviewed By: abby On: November 16, 2002 02:44 CST
Comment/Review:
please update soon |
Reviewed By: Scarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm usually not into Van x Hitomi centric stories but this one is interesting. I'll be looking out for updates on it. |
Reviewed By: Scarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Hitomi!
This story is far from bland. Very interesting premise, it's a nice twist on the original Esca storyline. Excellent writing! |
Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 20:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic has potential. Please continue on. I would enjoy being able to read the next chapters as soon as they are up.
Power to the people! Peace Out!
~Raye-Rei~ |
Reviewed By: Lev On: February 07, 2003 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really interesting fic so far. ^_^ I love how you've portrayed Van.
I really hope you continue! (I *will* get down on my knees and beg for more if necessary...) |
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