| "Anizoid interactive" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shizumi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it, ya kinda messed some spelling out (OK one word) and you kinda made Harry sound like a battle dork...Ah well. Harry will make a comeback, he always does anyway. Oh, and love that part with the "Fuzzy Pandas Team" |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray! Another chapter - and Harry's team has won! (claps excitedly) I would have felt so bad for him if he'd lost to the Fuzzy Pandas!
Ya know, SOME day I am going to catch ALL the spelling/grammar errors. Mia culpa yet again!
The three delinquents cracked me up. Beath sounds like a bit of an enigma.
Looking forward to chapter 6! |
Reviewed By: DarkBunnyRabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You used Ray!!!! I'm so happy I could hug you! *smiles* But I won't. Anyway, great job on this chapter, I can't wait until the next one. But one question, why does poor Ray have to get stuck with them? I feel sorry for her. Out of what little episodes I have seen, I have seen one with them in it and..... Well, they're kind of... dense.
Will she be able to pull the team around? Will they EVER win a battle? I MUST KNOW!!!!!! *cough* Anyway.....
Good chapter! Until I review again your friend.....
~Emy~ or DarkBunnyRabbit *shrugs* Which everone you want..... |
Reviewed By: Kitai Matsuru On: September 27, 2002 22:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
You already know what I rate this^.^ I just read chapter 5! i love it! It was soo fun! Interactive fics rule! Too bad FF.net can't see that. Oh well. Write more soon! pleaz! |
Reviewed By: Pyremon Infernos On: September 27, 2002 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'ello again. Chapter 5 was a blast! Wonder if now that Ray, having joined the Tigers Team and lost, will find out about the Tigers Team's OTHER, more recognizable name, "The Fuzzy Pandas Team";)
Enjoyed the bar scene with Shiva, too. What with Axel's little fist-poundy-thing!
Concerning pairings, I don't really care, except for that I'll remain strongly opposed to Bit/Leena. |
Reviewed By: Top duelist On: September 27, 2002 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey great story oh and for other reviewers reading this Zoid fic called Never Ending Sorrow it explains a little about some of the characters in this story. |
Reviewed By: Shizumi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 06:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
OK sine you asked, Im gonna say where my fic is...in mediaminer as well! LOL, betcha dint see dat comin. Oh yea, a ninja pancake is just filled with chocolate chips and strawberries... |
Reviewed By: Syren On: September 25, 2002 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I just came back to place my vote on Leena and Bit. And if my review kinda looks weird please ignore the mistakes. Though I'm not even sure if it'll come up. |
Reviewed By: Syren On: September 25, 2002 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey remember me? It's good to see your fanfic up and running again. I also want to thank you for going into detail about the Anizoids. It's all starting to make sense. I really enjoyed reading this so far. Can't wait to hear more form you. |
Reviewed By: Argent Inluminai On: September 25, 2002 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not gonna try to rate it individually, but collectively this fanfic's great! The only problems I can see are minor spelling/grammar errors here and there, but they don't detract much from the fic itself. And of course, the anizoid idea itself is one Zoids hasn't seen much of (at least to my knowledge). I especially liked Benji's reaction to Shiva in Chapter 4, and the "Cast in the name of good..." quote from the judge; it was pretty funny, IMHO, and from Big O, was it not? Well, the original was "Cast in the name of God," but whatever. As always, can't wait for the next installment! 'Til then, ciao! |
Reviewed By: Mookie On: September 25, 2002 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get more into the story with each chapter! I think you've done an excellent job with the battle scenes - it really shows the personality as well as the fighting style of each warrior, not to mention the chemistry between team mates!
Finally, Harry Champ is introduced! Hurray! Of course Mary's anizoid would be antagonistic towards him - the poor guy!
The judge's first day on the job - I thought my sides were going to split. His lines were some of the best!
Looking forward to your next installment! |
Reviewed By: Jaid Skywalker On: September 25, 2002 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great job! I love the way you write zoid battles. Glad Anhai was introduced; good job on her character! Poor Finn *chuckles* Hey, are you pairing up Harry and Leena? Oh, and I liked the judge too, lol. Can't wait for the next chappy! |
Reviewed By: SparkyKnight On: September 24, 2002 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it really much so far. Are you gonna have a batter between the Blitz and Zero X team in the next chapter? That would be interesting but its only a comment. I hope you remember to e-mail me when you update!! |
Reviewed By: Shizumi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah, your good. That was an awsome chapter and hey, I was able to get through! YAY! Oh and My brother votes for Bit and Leena. He been watching Chaotic Century instead of this though. Anyhey, good job yes! |
Reviewed By: DarkBunnyRabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Action, action and more action!!! Yippee! This was great! Just thought I'd tell you that.
So when does Ray appear? Tell me soon?
Well, can't wait till your next update! Hurry please!
~DarkBunnyRabbit~ |
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