| "Pain of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mais Non, Mon Ami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 12:43 CST
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Sorry I havent reviewed until now but that was incredible! Please continue! This story's addictive ... in a non-Duo addicted type of way. ;-) Anyways, you're doing great! Please continue!
~Mais Non, Mon Ami |
Reviewed By: mikisho On: March 07, 2003 14:44 CST
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your fic is wonderful! i love it! oh yeah, and i think i read another version of this where duo sees wufei cooking and gets mad cause wu looks like his momma. then duo holds a knife to wu's neck and decides to kill him. now im confused. is that another version of something you wrote, or is that another fic by another author?
oh yeah, and please dont let duo die. i know you do want it to be a happily ever after thing, but duo is still wu's brother, nonetheless. just have duo go to jail or something instead. you should have q-man get some action too (and zechs or trieze mysteriously show up)! actually, it would be really cool if quatre lectured duo on how duo is being abusive, and then duo realized his actions and apologized, or went to some sort of abuse clinic and apologized. It would also be cool if wu and tro got married. i know they're young, but it would be soooooooo cute!
Or, you could always end it on a angsty note, and have heero rape wu, and then wu kills himself cause he doesnt think he deserves trowa.
sorry for writing so much. you dont have to take any of my ideas, cause like my fics, their really stupid :-)! and dont forget to finish this wonderful fic, cause I'LL KILL YOU IF YOU DONT! J/K!
your fan,
mikisho |
Reviewed By: how can you!!!??????????!!!!!!!!!! On: March 07, 2003 14:28 CST
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how can you do this to me??????????????!!!!!!!! just stopping there? the ficcie is too good! its just EVIL to do that to a reader when you write so well!
write more! i love it! keep it up! and email me PLEASE when you update!!!!
mandy200@aol.com |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:50 CST
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yay, love it, but it was the end was it?? It better not be, please, please another part |
Reviewed By: Aria On: March 05, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated again I am so happy!!!!! I'm still here and you're welcome for the ideas! I am a natural romantic at heart and I must have a happy ending in all stories. The way you are writing right now is capable of taking this story in a number of places! You can have Wufei move out of his house with Duo and have Quatre help keep him safe! (Have Q play bodyguard :P) But what about Heero?! Oh no! I don't think Quatre will be able to get him out of the house as quickly as Wufei would like and next time he might not be as lucky as he was with Heero. I hope you use something like the park idea, it would be just like in Wufei's book! The prince coming to the rescue of the damsel! Give me an e-mail and we can talk more. ^_^
Love ya,
Aria
P.S. Sorry about the really long e-mail...I kinda got carried away. *blushes* hehe Oops. |
Reviewed By: The B-chan On: February 22, 2003 23:40 CST
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No! That was evil. It's not nice to tease....oh well. You said "If you really want that lemon, then tell me how much you want it" so I will. Please write it or I'll cry! That is a grave threat from me. you must submit to the lure of writing the lemon! it's mean not to.
Impaitiently Awaiting Next Chapter (hopefully with lemon), The B-chan |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 14:58 CST
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yay another chapter. can't wait till the next chapter. :P |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 22, 2003 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really cool! I hope you do write the lemon in soon or you will have a reason to swear on your early grave. WRITE THE LEMON. Please. Okat anyway the story is excellent and I hope you don't let Heero get a piece of Wufei. Maybe Heero will try to molest him in a park and Trowa will come to Wufei's rescue. Then have a happy lemon scene. That would be sooooooo KAWAI! Oh and what about Quatre? What is going to happen when Duo and Wufei come in? I hope nothing bad does happen...I think. But if Duo hits him in there then Quatre will have proof of the abuse and
Wufei can get transfered to another home! Then Trowa and his family can offer to take him up and then the park thing happens with Heero. Okay sorry about blabbing all these ideas, but you said you were getting short. I don't know if these fit your writing style but I think they would go very well with the situation you have set up.
Love ya,
Aria
P.S. You always could have Duo die from using Heroine. Then Yuy would be free to stalk him. Uh-oh. 0_0 RUN WUFEI! |
Reviewed By: Koriko_dragoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 13:26 CST
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I luffle you for finally getting it up^^ I have been dieing to read this chapter (Sure you knew that already though ^.~)
Ko-Ko Loves Anime |
Reviewed By: The B-chan On: February 20, 2003 15:51 CST
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Ahhhhh!!! ::just finished Ch.9:: That's cruel, dangling the lemon carrot out in front of people like that. Just wanted to let you know, I'm really liking the fic. I'm a huge AU Angst fan and this has got plenty of both. Poor Wufei. Keep up with the good work! And soon.
Eargerly Awaiting Next Chapter, The B-chan |
Reviewed By: Kacey On: February 18, 2003 14:44 CST
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Very lovely I would love to see more from you, You are very talented. |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 18:32 CST
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can't wait till the next part. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 03, 2003 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write a lemon! THERE MUST BE A LEMON REALLY SOON!! YOU'RE TORTURING ME!!! Thanx
Aria |
Reviewed By: Aria On: January 30, 2003 04:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Wufei! You have toi update again soon and give him a lemon with Tro in the near future or I think I will go nuts! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!
Bye! |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 19:30 CST
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yay another chapter, can't wait tiil the next part |
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