| "Love and Obligation" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: December 31, 2002 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EM told me about this fic & I just had to read it. Normally I don't read anything but DBZ only to narrow the selections, but I do follow authors I really like. This is no exception to your other fics. It's a great beginning. I love this series! Isn't this the ultimate question? Can't wait to see how you continue it. I know you e-mailed & said you would be continuing "Granted" and "Timeline". Can't wait for those either. |
Reviewed By: zel no miko On: December 13, 2002 02:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a relatively good fic. (sorry about the low creativity rating, but I just did that because it isn't too hard to find a bunch of the 'who will inuyasha choose?' fics) I can't wait to read the next chapter. The story has great potential. (could email me when you finish the next chappie - zel_no_miko@animeflipside.com) |
Reviewed By: Graceria On: December 13, 2002 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you're doing a FABULOUS job on this fic so far!! You seem to have a much better grip on the characters attitudes than many of the authors out there. You're writing style is very enjoyable as well. Please continue to write and I hope to see more of this story soon! |
Reviewed By: kat On: December 11, 2002 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do you does every story I really like end with me wondering what is going to happen next? Why for once cant you finish it? HURRY GET A NEW CHAPTER! IT IS GOOD! I LIKE IT A LOT! |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sounding really good so far and I would really like to see what you can do with it. Please update again soon and keep up the good work. You are a very skilled author and I really wanna know what happens next. Ja Ne. Bai Bai |
Reviewed By: animealam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a good first chapter and you managed to capture the conflict in Inuyasha's mind perfectly. I hope to see a new chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job so far! I can't wait for an update. InuYasha has become one of my favorite animes (I only get to watch it on Adult Swim), and I'm totally loving your plot! It's written very well. Write write write!! Update update update! |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. I hope you have InuYasha make the right choice... |
Reviewed By: NightShadow On: March 23, 2003 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a GREAT story, I LOVED it!!! You explain the character so well. The scene when Kagome leaves back to her own world is soo sad. Keep up the EXCELLENT work and UPDATE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 08:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool! Awesome! I didn't think it would come to that, but...ITS A REALLY GREAT FIC! Uptade plees!!!
^^Allie^^ |
Reviewed By: Cataluna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good first chapter. I like the way you explained the conflict in Inuyasha's mind and the different choices he has to make. I hope you'll write more soon. |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 23:53 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty good!! update soon! 3 chaps is long enough i think..~.^ |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 23:11 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O *.*.....^.^ GREAT STORY!!!!!! ^.^ PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON! ^.^ please....great story and I cant think of anything else to say.... -_-' GREAT STORY!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Saki On: January 21, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was my first time reading this and I'm so impressed. Very sad emotions from Kagome. I always wanted to hit Inuyasha for never outright picking the girl he wanted. Which better be Kagome! ^_^ |
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