| "Demon of Justice" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 13:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is a few years old now, so I wasn't really planning on reviewing it, but I figured, since this is the 4th time I'm reading it start to where it leaves off, I should at least mention that I've enjoyed it. It has a safe feeling, good triumfs over evil, kindness wins the day, so it's a good way of cheering up. I'm a bit more partial to the Wufei storyline, mainly because of the character quirks in the supporting gallery. Thankyou, if somewhat delayed.
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Reviewed By: tasukis_gecko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 21:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is very entertaining. It has been the only thing keeping me from going insane with work and school. I love what you did with relena usually i would be completely happy if she was killed off by the first chapter. I am kinda hoping wufei will become Krashnark's champion, that would rock, plus i kinda feel sorry for him. He can't help it that he is always right... Well Anyway UPDATE SOON!!!! I ran outta chapters!! =(
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Reviewed By: Jewelle_sprite On: May 31, 2005 15:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*scratches head* I knew there was something bothering me... what'd you do with Tomanak? and... and... Vaijon was a member of the Scale Balancer's order. And if Tomanak isn't in this story Bahzell probably won't be either. I've noticed several differences when I went and grabbed the book to look at DW's pantheon and I can only assume that the changes are necessary to the plot of this story and since I'm really enjoying it I won't complain too much but I liked Tomanak and Bahzell. Are you going to 'rescue' Wufei and bring him back to his original world or are you going to strand the rest in Norfressa. And are we going to see the mage - Wencil (sp? name?) in this fic? *going to go finish reading now and hope you've already answered these questions*
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Reviewed By: Jewelle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 03:20 EDT
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Well colour me surprised at this crossover. I loved David Weber's Oath of Swords but I haven't recognized any of the hradani names yet, have you used any of the author's characters? I guess I'm just going to have to go read and find out.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama (nsi) On: May 18, 2005 17:59 EDT
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I don't know what's better....the author's babble, or the fic itself. I love this fic so far. I'm a little...well- way behind. I just started reading and am only on chap 6. You guys are great!
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Asaka_sama[not logged in] On: May 14, 2005 17:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give it a perfect ten! It's honestly a ery good, plot-rich fic! Congrats! And I love Kushy, I tend to find myself rooting for him. Win Wufei, Kushy! Update soon, ladies!
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Reviewed By: myterious double On: March 02, 2004 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a fantastic story!!! But looking at your updating rate, i'm really scared. You guys have to update it quick please!!!! I love the humor and sarcasm in this story. The characterization feels very accurate and very realistic. Argh...you have to update, I wanna know what happens next^_^!!! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 10:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I absolutely adore all of your fanfiction, especially "Rebuilding" and its sequel and "Alarums and excursions" and now I've discovered this one. Normally I don't read fanfiction where Wufei doesn't get one of the other G-boys, but because your writing is so good, I read this one, and I'm glad that I did! I really, really, really hope that you'll make Wufei and Krashnark get together. That would be soooooo great. The Dark God of War is so cool. Will you? If you do, I wonder, how would you possibly make it a happy ending, Wufei doesn't belong in Krashnark's world and Krashnark doesn't belong in Wufei's world. Please, please, tell me that Wufei will get Krashnark eventually. Anyway, I just wanted to say, your writing is so great and I'll eagerly await an update!
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Title: chasing the crown
Reviewed By: discord2chaos On: January 21, 2004 18:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, just so you know WRITE WRITE WRITE On a side note when you said go read Ex-fam's Chasing the Crown in this chapter, I went to look for it but I couldn't find it until just recently, I found it under Bonne&Von at gwaddiction.com I just thought that you should know not every one skips the author babble and that I love all your fics and that I take your recomendations seriously. If you ever need a Betta Reader just email me at discord2chaos@yahoo.com PS: if i ever post my fanfiction i hope you archive it
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Reviewed By: Psi-Neko On: October 20, 2003 21:02 EDT
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So when are you going to continue? Come on!! You have to continue! Also, what's the title to the song in Musical Anguish (Chapter 24). The one with these lyrics I was hanging upside-down from the overpass, waiting to discover something about the world Because It's been realy bothering me. Anyway Please continue and Please give me the title and writer of the song!!! If you don't I'll send an army of evil Relenas after you!!
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Reviewed By: suzuka_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 13:11 EDT
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This is my all-time favorite story. Please update it soon. I've read everyone of your stories, on every site that I can find them on...But this is my favorite. Please, please, please write more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 17:33 EDT
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Please...oh please continue writing this FASTER!!! I love this story but damn it started in December! You don't even have to end it fast, just put up more posts...yeah and make them longer...yeah...*sighs* never mind. Anyway I can't wait to read more from you two....you do some great work! |
Reviewed By: Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 23:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this fic on fanfiction.net and I'm still in love with it!
The last four chapters are especially good! I can't help thinking what a great movie this would make (or Web comic), Book of Eth and all!
Continue on...eth! |
Reviewed By: Lady Bum [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 12:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE ASAP!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Maxine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eek, poor Wufei! Jeez, they kinda butchered his body, ne? Great chapter! It's getting really interesting, now that Duo is connected to him. Loved it! |
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