| "A Difference of Sides" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: babydragon On: February 11, 2003 10:54 CST
Comment/Review:
ish good!! thought it would be more fluffy, but this is really good. XD is your writing always so dark and scary? neeway, i still love everything about it, specially the characterization... hope you update this soon! |
Reviewed By: Kioko Mitsu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea, the plot, and the pairing.
But... at the beginning you were switching tenses... That is the bane of all mistakes to me. Ack. Most of it is in past-tense actions but there are some that are present tense verbs.
Other than that... I love it. And I want to see more. I like how Osamu is nice in your fics. I've read so many where is he is evil incarnate.. O.o? I dunno.
I love all your fics Sugah, keep writing.
~Kelly |
Reviewed By: Hotaru-chan On: January 11, 2003 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this...very interesting. The idea of Ken and Daisuke handcuffed together is great..no matter what, hehe. And I love the tension between the two...I know it'll turn into something else ^_~ |
Reviewed By: lavafrog On: January 07, 2003 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so great to see another fic from you!! And this one, just like all the others of course, is wonderful! I love Daiken, and I like the idea of a punk Dai (good daydream material..hmm..) and a sheltered Ken. Keep up the wonderful work!! I hope you continue your fics soon! |
Reviewed By: sailorcelestia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 00:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good. another im addicted to! Keep it up and update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Ichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 21:03 CST
Comment/Review:
ooooooooo interesting i like |
Reviewed By: Konpeitou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 21:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Aaaah!! Somehow your stories always make me addicted, even before I realize it's you writing it! Hoee, another story to follow along after.. You are going to write more for this soon, na?Hnng, tanoshimi ^__^!!
Wouldn't mind more of your others in the near future either.. e.e; |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! A new ficcie from you. For some reason I've always liked the Pampered Priss Meets Wrong Side of Tracks stories. They're just so... *evil grin* ... fun. It's even better that they can't get away from the other. Write more! ....... And, *begs* any chance of more BodyHeat or Oasis soon? |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 05:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cool. I luved almost as much as I luved ur story Bodyheat |
Reviewed By: Jared1606 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I really liked the fic, cause you managed to bring out he emotions very well- you gave the idea that Ken was a really sheltered kid (which I reckon is what you want) and that Daisuke is more streetwise of the two; and you definitely left off on a very serious note, suggesting that something serious is about to happen.
I really like your fic, cause it's really different (and it's a ken/Dai fic- my fave pair ^_^), and even though it contains a fair amount of swearing (which I believe resulted in the rating), I found it very enjoyable (though I would prefer it to be free of the f-word - still, it's your story, and you just do what you like ^_^ )
Hope you'll update this story soon. ^_^ I'll keep an eye out for it. ^_^ |
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