| "Panthera tigris tigris" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: erickat On: January 15, 2003 22:39 CST
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see SaintMe? ;) |
Reviewed By: Sony On: January 13, 2003 19:08 CST
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Duch: Fuck off
My mistake, yer right it does make sense now. I'm just used to seeing the aftermath of encounters before heading onto something else. I hate V/B romances...it's disgusting plus I just hate Bulma. You should definately continue. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 19:00 CST
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Kurai: (cries) No! You can't NOT finish this! It's too good!! Poor Ouji sama, all that pent up sexual tension and nowhere to vent it...
Stop RIGHT there, Ku-chan!!
SaintMe, this story is wonderful, and if you don't continue to post it for lack of reiviews, We would consider it a great favor if you would e-mail the rest to us.
chibi_majin_angel@yahoo.com
Kurai: New chapter, PLEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZ!!!! I love this story...
-Later Dayz & TAnx!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 13, 2003 14:10 CST
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You can't end the story!! (pouts) I'm really getting into it! Oh well, do what you must, but if you do end it, I would like to read the rest of it.
audra0297@houston.rr.com |
Reviewed By: duchessericka On: January 13, 2003 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again, i think that this is great. origional and the like. i love it..
sony: you have no right to tell SaintMe how to write her story. its one thing to give advise, and i like this and that, but quite another to try and tell her how she should set up her own writing. you sound like you should maybe learn the fine art of mystery. its what keeps a reader reading....
i think its a great story... eventful enough to keep moving, yet mysterious enough to keep me interested...!!!! :) |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 11, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a great story you've got here. The semi-lemon was very good, too bad they didn't continue. Heh heh. Update soon please. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Sony On: January 11, 2003 18:49 CST
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Erm...ya kinda lost me there...maybe ya should revise this and explain WHAT happened between Vegeta and Aria BEFORE you introduce a new charrie. Cuz ya totally fucked up there. Dun worry, I do the same thing. Just a suggestion but you should think your next chapter over in yer head...like watchin TV in yer skull...visualize what's gonna happen for a few days until you've found something that you like and that fits with the rest of the story. Anywho..I'm ranting..
Back to the fic, you REALLY should explain why Vegeta pushed Aria out of his bed and maybe give the both of them thoughts on what happened. Also douse Aria in a pool full of angst over this. I'm a sucker for angst. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story!
You seem to have really thought this out.
Kurai: (she hardly ever thinks he stories thru) Aria makes me laugh, she has such an attitude. ANd the lemon you did was great.^_^
Well, my muse Kurai and I look forward to another update soon. Hope others review, it would be a shame for this not to be continued.
Kurai: I have to agree with Sony's review. Jita needs the edge. He IS my Ouji after all.
(she's a Saiya-jin)
-Later DAyz & TAnx!! ^_^
Gemi & Kurai |
Reviewed By: duchessericka On: January 10, 2003 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, dear, i like it a lot, and i think i may be hooked. darn it! now im gonna be reading this all the frickin time! teehee! anyway ya, up to chapter 3 is awesome.. what a way to set up a 'future rendezvous' (ok , so i cant spell) ... but yeah.. rock on. :) |
Reviewed By: Sony On: January 09, 2003 20:49 CST
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This is cool but I think you should give Vegeta the superior edge over her or she'll be drifting too close to being a mary sue if she's stronger and shit than Vegeta. But that's just a suggestion so dun pay attention to it if ya dun want to but do continue. I like this a lot. |
Reviewed By: Sony On: January 16, 2003 11:56 CST
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*coughcough*lemon*coughcough* We ALL want Vegeta and Aria to semi get along. Ya know Vegeta isn't THAT short. He's about 6' while Goku is about 6'5 and so forth. That's what makes him look like a lil runt. My best friend towers over my other friend who is 6' so there is a BIG difference between a few inches. Freaky, no? |
Reviewed By: DemonOnYourShoulder On: February 15, 2003 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok call me a little bit byas because i had a little hand in this story.... well Archly anyway.... he he he, well SaintMe i finally got onto the page... figured i'd add a little review for ya |
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