| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jean/Klopez717 On: March 29, 2004 20:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. I loved reading it, and I look forward to reading more. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 01:17 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz plz and pretty plz update soon I love this story. I do hope that Sessy and Kagome stay together and I hope also in the future (kagome's time)that he and her get together. plz plz plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: wynter h On: March 25, 2004 07:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the way you put sess and kag togethere in the last chap. love the story line with the seporate time lines and how sess and kag act differently around each other. i enjoyed reading it, the best inu-yasha story i have ever read. i would so enjoy an updated soon wait slash that i can't wait unit it's finished. LOVED the other caractors you add in, and not making hojo a total geek. some points had laughs and some tears, good mixture. over all i loved reading it and hope there would be an update soon.
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Reviewed By: lil_angel On: March 23, 2004 16:19 EST
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I really enjoy the story you wrote. The sytle and story line is amazing. Just a thought though, is the story finished or are you going to end it like that cuz if you do, it's pretty lame. If not, hope you continue to finish the story soon.
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Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 00:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad that this fiction is still alive!! Thanks for updating, it was a fabulous chapter!!
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan*notloggedin On: March 18, 2004 20:00 EST
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goddamn! it took me a week to read this chapter! everytime i start reading it and really start getting into it something happens! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn this is a long chapter!...I like it a lot....the lemon was great too...
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Title: YELLYYELLALOT@AOL.COM
Reviewed By: YELLY On: March 17, 2004 22:57 EST
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I LOVE THIS FIC THANKS FOR UPDATING IM A LITTLE COMFUSED ABOUT THE PLOT LINE THAT IS IN THE FUTURE THERE ARE STILL 2 PLOTS RIGHT ONNE IS WHERE IT SORT OF EXPLIANS WHY SHE CAN'T REMEMBER ALOT OF WHAT SHE WENT THROOUGHT IN HIGH SCHOOL AND THE OTHER IS WHEN SHE IS THE FUTURE AND MEETS SESSHOU AND WHAT THE HELL IS THIS THAT SOTA IS SESSHOUMARU OR SOMETHING PLEASE E-MAIL ME SOME RESPONSES
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: claudia67g [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best chapter EVER!!! This is a great chapter, it was well worth the wait!!!!! I LOVE this chapter... i hope you update soon and let it be just a juicy!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 19:02 EST
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ALL HAIL THE MIGHTY VOLPA-KAMI!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY TOO MUCH FOR MERE WORDS TO EXPRESS!!!! You are probably the most thoughtful author I have ever read a story from. I mean, you have impecable taste in music (I love Sometimes!), you have enough skill to combine two different times, you write PERFECT battle scenes, and you know just how to balance sadness, anger, the urge to fight, happiness, and lust. You, my dear, are comparable to the Fates themselves (or what ever being created/thought the idea of writing) I salute you!
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Title: *Delighted Squeak!*
Reviewed By: The one and only... Ookami *snickers and winks* On: March 17, 2004 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*chuckles and glomps* Dude, that was fabulous! Your writing just gets better and better every time you come up with a new chapter and I'm terribly impressed. It was sad, poignant, sweet, sexy, cute, silly... a whole massive jumble of beautifully portrayed emotions and interactions. You know I love how very clear your descriptions are and that you balance your structure and writing to a point where it's not too much or too little. Don't worry about the hopelessly AU thing either, hon, you've got a great thing going with your idea here so don't get too caught up in other things. ^__~ As always, if you need anything, drop me a line. Other than that, I shall be waiting eagerly for your next installment. *blows kisses and waves*
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Reviewed By: heninu11 On: March 17, 2004 12:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i am soo glad u updated it has been soo long sinnce you last did i thought you weren't going to. This is my alltime faverite story of all the ones that i have read. So please up date soon. This story is too good.
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Reviewed By: Flying_dragon On: March 17, 2004 11:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good that u didnt abondon the fic and updated it :) im not surprised it took so long, must have taken u 4ever 2 write the new chappie, maybe two weeks or so nonstop! keep up da good work and ill b waitin for the next chappie!
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Title: the best
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 06:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is still the best i have ever read it's totally awsome and i'm loving it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Blazed On: March 17, 2004 05:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're amazing and I absolutely love you! Seriously, the story is one of the best fanfictions that I've ever read and definetly the best Inuyasha. It's even worth the INCREDIBLY long wait for each chapter...but seriously, keep writing,because it only keeps getting better...
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