| "Vegeta Goes Camping!" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 23:23 CDT
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Hehe...this fic is good. It manages to keep Vegetas character while adding humor to it, but I doubts he notices that some things he said were funny. ^^ Keep up the goodness!
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Reviewed By: foxfire9. On: March 09, 2004 08:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT. IT WAS HALLARIOUS! GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: PerfectCell 17 On: March 01, 2004 16:18 CST
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Hehehe that was a really fic. 'anti Kakarot club' Go Veggie!
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Title: ANTI-KAKAROTTO!!!
Reviewed By: DeeGeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GIRL THAT WAS GREAT!!!!You did a good job. and you got perfect 10's from me!!!! I loved the whole part about the internet thingy, and yeah, you need to make some more on goku's and bulma's point of views. that was cool. and then make the ending of how the internet thingy worked out. you should make more of vegeta's 'mind on paper'. it was a good idea and good story. Keep it up, chic!!! lates
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Reviewed By: VegetaRocks On: October 27, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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haha! I've read it like twice and I still can't get over how funny it is.
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Reviewed By: hmmmmmmmm..... On: August 24, 2003 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAH
that was the BEST but I like all your stuff ^_^ I'm living in China now, and we all went on a long trip, I just got back 2 days ago, we biked 4000 KM accross China, it was hard, and I was feeling alot like Vegata in this, I hated everyone! lol and all the GUYS had Diarys, in Canada, I dont' think its "cool" for guys to have diarys, lol *shrugs* I donno. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 09:44 CDT
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10 of 10 rating (my browser is messed up right now) This was great! Yes, you should continue this with journals from the other characters. Hehe!
Poor Veggie, I really felt sorry for him...
hehe!
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Cerulean Rhapsody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes... I was just wondering... Where can I join the Kakkarott hating club? LOL! |
Reviewed By: Dark Demigoddess On: June 18, 2003 16:38 CDT
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hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe...
I loved it! Write another chapter, pretty please... |
Reviewed By: bimbo and ditz On: June 10, 2003 05:41 CDT
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we like this it was funne! check out our three fics we may seem sad but we luv reviews lol its bimbo here by the way! keep up the g8 work!!! |
Reviewed By: LMOA!!!! On: May 24, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Ha-lair-E-us! Great job, I really haven't laughed that hard in awhile. I can really relate with Vegeta ( I've had REALLY, really bad experiences with camping trips, mostly involving, well, the wilderness! See, my idea of a perfect camping trip is where the insects are repelled by the glowing gas lamp, not attracted to it and burning their little insect butts off by landing on it. And let me tell you, if you've never smelled roasted insects on a warm summer night, you ain't smelled nothin'!) N e wayz, where was I? Oh yes, write more, and feel free to use my idea of roasted insects if you want to on ur other chapters...I think I would find it quite amusing how you would put THAT into words.
--Chow! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can actually see this happening lol this was so good keep it going. |
Reviewed By: OhSoDevilish On: March 18, 2003 07:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, that was hilarious! Please write more, ou could just picture him scowling and thinking those thoughts! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Crackes up* hah! oh kami that was fuunny!
poor lil veggiechan he must really hate camping....well can't blame...I hate camping too! lol great fic , make more chapters in the other peoples views i want to know how they took the camping trip.^_^ |
Reviewed By: MajinoujiVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it, i haven't had a good laugh in a freakin while and this fic made up for it, lol. I suggest more of Vegeta's inner thoughts in the form of a diary, being as great as he is after all. |
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