| "Take My Memories Away" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: psychosnaz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 18:36 CDT
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damn, this is just getting better and better. though there's this little voice inside of me crying out "youji!" and sobbing, i just love how you described and fashioned shoji's character. can't wait to see how he interacts with his new team members and if/when he meets weiss on the mission.
had me crying again at the end, seeing how aya and omi dealt with youji's loss... *sniffles* i'm also hoping that that memory bit of youji's has to do with aya! *begs*
again, can't wait to read more, especially as it looks like you're out to write a looooooong one! yay!!! *gives out chibi-ayan and yotan plushies* =^.^= |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 16:21 CDT
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Very nicely done. I like the memories of Shoji ... too bad he gets betrayed by another redhead in them. Shadow and Weiss will have an assignment together already? Oh my... this will be interesting won't it? I hope you put out more of this soon! |
Reviewed By: Crimson Shadow On: April 06, 2003 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great followup and I agree, I would luv to get my hands on the new Yohji/Black Leopard and actually see a pic of him in his new persona. He sounds hot, and I am dying to know what memory he has retained (has to be of Aya *chibi eyes pleading*). Love the little bit with the Weib team and wanted to hug Omi and Aya *drools everywhere* Aya.....mmmmmmmmmmm. |
Reviewed By: Dani B [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 13:48 CDT
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I'm so enjoying this story. Strange how BL had a bad experience with a redhead and Youji has too. For Youji it's what made him agree to become BL and for BL it's what made him cold(er?). It is like they are alike, but BL was a darker shadow if Youji. And Manx setting that all up. Hopefully no one figures that out. And just because they don't want the two teams to interact, I expect that to be the first thing to happen. Murphy's law and all. One thing I have to talk about, when you described the tattoo it either was a bit, ah, "off" or I am reading it funny/wrong. Not sure which. I probably read it wrong, though.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter of this story (And boy would I love to see a picture of Youji as BL, tattoo and all. He sounds even yummier. ^_^). |
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I can't wait for the next few chapters to come out and see what happens next. Keep up the good work and I'm here to support you as always! ^_^ *waves a little AYYA banner too* |
Reviewed By: Earl Grey On: March 19, 2003 04:24 CST
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Ch, the very least Aya could have done was to tell Yohji he was breaking up BEFORE he slept with Yuushi. Omi and Ken were so sweet. I'm really anxious to find out what the new Yohji is going to be like and how he and Shinzo Ezakiya are going to interact. *hint hint* |
Reviewed By: Tsunami On: March 18, 2003 08:46 CST
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Amazing how Aya gets hostile when he is the one in the wrong. I'm intrigued by the story idea and look forward to meeting the new team. Some of the descriptions remind me of Weiss. |
Reviewed By: Scented Candles [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Shaeric! *looks up at all the lovely reviews*
hm...i can only say that they are all right! This fic is absolutely wonderful, but you already know that! *grins* Hoooray! waves AYYA banner. |
Reviewed By: psychosnaz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... my... god... so much ANGST!!! i'm very very impressed, love the fic and where it's going so far. absolutely can't wait to read the next parts!!
once again, bravo! *bows and wipes a tear* |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: March 17, 2003 16:47 CST
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I don't think I'll mind OOC Youji since he'll really be a new person. A very nice twist on the Aya getting back together with Yuushi idea. I can't wait to see what Youji's like and what happens to him. ^^ |
Reviewed By: tmelange On: March 17, 2003 15:58 CST
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Great start to a very interesting story! I look forward to more. |
Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 14:25 CST
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Ok, I realize that Yohji didn't really die, but when the boys got the phone call I was getting all upset and teary. I really can't wait to see where you are going with this and the new "Shadows" team. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Crimson Shadow On: March 17, 2003 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa I have to agree that this is a very angsty original and intriguing story. I want another chapter NOW! Okay I am serious but in a nice way. Yohji OOC doesn't bother me though normally it would but if he is becoming the persona Black Leopard then I cant wait to see him in his new team. Keep it coming
Crimson |
Reviewed By: silvertoekee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa talk about a angsty and pain filled chapter. this is a very original and interesting story. can't wait for the next chapter to come out! |
Reviewed By: neko-chan On: March 20, 2003 00:33 CST
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wow. great fic! um, couple of things you should work on - your tenses get mixed up, stick with I or He for the whole fic (or charecter). also, you might want to work on your grammar; a new sentance for every new idea! other than that, your spelling and word use are great, and the plot is fantastic! please continue with this! soon...? |
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