| "5 Princes, 4 Assasins, a General, and a Kip" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Codename: Mastermind [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, *CACKLE* This is SO amusing. I'm loving it. I'd be willing to co-write some stuff or act as a 'plot bouncer' (Que applauding for corny joke). I was waiting for someone to write a funny GW WK cross over. *cackle* Love this!
~ Mastermind
(I'd like to see Hiiro in a fight with Aya, but that's just me... *cackles at the thought*) |
Reviewed By: Zel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the fic it rocks so far like the writing to |
Reviewed By: DeathAngel1x2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfiction...but i thought the way the got there was kinda confusing but thats okay cuz its a great fic ne wayz!!! i love the way Aya and Heero is almost the same in personality and glares at each other lolz....plez update soon cuz i would really like to read more of this story!! |
Reviewed By: jen On: June 13, 2003 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh oh oh!! i love it!! but, i think that your pairings need to be changed. like why all gw characters w/ eachother and all wk characters w/ eachother? mix it up!! like aya and heero, and yohji and duo!! they'd be cute!! gomen, i'm babbling. but you said something about needing someone to "bounce" ideas off of so if you wanna my email is orbitaltiger8@aol.com
i really love those 2 animes!! but i hate quatre. he almost kills trowa *eyes tear up* who is my favorite in gw. but like I said its awesome nonetheless! update soon! |
Reviewed By: O_O On: June 05, 2003 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea, but don't leave us hanging. Nice dialogue, but don't overdo it. Describe what's happening a bit more. Ok I'm really interested in where this is going. Update soon, please (puppy eyes). |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2003 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
*glomps* yatta!!!!! you combined my two most favorite animes in the world!!
anyway, down to business, a little constructive criticism: you have all the characters nicely IC, but i think you're using too much dialogue. not in that they're talking too much, but all they're doing is talking. you should try and describe more, perhaps a little more of the characters' thoughts. i think that would make what is coming to be a good story so much better. if you want any more advice i'd be more than happy to, just email me.
also, i'm really really happy you're writing this fic, and i really do hope you finish it out til the end.
Mara |
Reviewed By: Tinabinna On: May 08, 2003 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles* 2 of my favorite animes. Has my fav ppl Duo, Heero and Yogi! I hope you write more soon, this is one of only 3 crossovers of these 2 fandoms I hasve ever found. |
Reviewed By: kika On: May 07, 2003 10:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is really funny, I really like it so far. please update soon |
Reviewed By: Mia On: May 01, 2003 20:02 CDT
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I luv the idea of a WK/GW crossover. MY fav character is duo. Not really big on quatre. |
Reviewed By: malik_n_ceres_s_hana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah-
Good job, so far, hun- even if the story hasn't been updated in forever! C'mon- at least another chapter ((and longer, too!)) |
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