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"Baby sitting Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ]
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 Reviewed By: yurkara  On: July 01, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like the story so far. I can just imagine both Hiei and Kurama as little kids. I wonder if they will ever get turn back into adults. IT a great story so far keep up the good work
 Reviewed By: Koori Heishi  On: June 30, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is the cutest fan fiction I have ever read! I had a smile on my face the whole time! Please, keep writing, it is very entertaining!
 Reviewed By: Athena  On: June 28, 2003 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I want another chapter*crosses arms and pouts* I am a little kitsune too, see *points to fake fox ears on her head and then turns around to show a fake fox tail* See. Now, I want another chapter or I'll cry. *scrunches up face and holds it until another chapter is produced*
 Reviewed By: Flameamber  On: June 27, 2003 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNN!!!! Keep goin'!
 Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 26, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! You must be the greatest author of all time!!! Well, your fanfiction are my very favorite along with this one fanfiction bu Youko-Kurama called Addicted To You. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT UPDATE FOR ME AND EVERYBODY ELSE OUT THERE!!! WE ARE ALL WAITING, I BOW DOWN TO YOUR FEET!!!!!!!!
***********Otkau~Hoshi
 Reviewed By: 1richlittleangel  On: June 26, 2003 16:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was goood!
I READ THIS BEFORE ON FANFICTION.NET
 Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa  On: June 26, 2003 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I rated your fan fic this way because thats the way it is! I give it two thumbs up. It what so funny the way baby Kurama learned to cry to get what he wants and that Hiei got the spanking he finnaly deserved. I your story Hiei sounds alot cuttier than he is when he is grown up.
 Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa  On: June 26, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I rated your fan fic this way because thats the way it is! I give it two thumbs up. I what so funny the way baby Kurama learned to cry to get what he wants and that Hiei got the spanking he finnaly deserved. I your story Hiei sounds alot cuttier than he is when he is grown up.
 Reviewed By: Rae  On: June 26, 2003 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a very funny story. plz update soon
 Reviewed By: Black Dragon  On: June 25, 2003 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
IT WAS GREAT I DID LAUGH BUT IT WASN'T AS FUNNY AS I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE!!!!

HiEi AnD kUrAmA
FOREVER
 Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2003 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the little kiss Hiei gave Kurama, so Kawaii! Update soon, so I can read some more of you XiaoXiong^_^!
 Reviewed By: Ally Hearts  On: August 18, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY you updated, twice! Like your other work its good, but too short. ^-^
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