| "Obsessions with a Seraph" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Exuumphinglybored On: October 15, 2003 22:03 CDT
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You! Update! It's a great story, and it's a shame to be left unfinished so. (sob.) You do it a great injustice by not completing the story..
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Reviewed By: WHO STOLE MY NICKNAME? On: October 10, 2003 20:13 CDT
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I first read this story at fanfiction.net, so i have no idea why would u take it off there, anyways, it's a good thing i know about this website, update soon, Lolita P.S. u had 17 chapeters done on fanfic.net and here only 2? u make me cry
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Reviewed By: WHO STOLE MY NICKNAME? On: October 10, 2003 20:12 CDT
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I first read this story at fanfiction.net, so i have no idea why would u take it off there, anyways, it's a good thing i know about this website, update soon, Lolita P.S. u had 17 chapeters done on fanfic.net and here only 2? u make me cry
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Reviewed By: SilverSurfAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this on fanfiction.net and you wrote more on that. Can you write some more on this one? |
Reviewed By: sidhepuella On: July 08, 2003 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, c'mon. Don't leave us hangin'. I must know what happens next!!! ;_; I think you've done a good job so far with characterization and plot. Spelling and grammar are good, except that you may have accidentally left out punctuation here and there. But overall, a good story so far. Update soon. ^^ |
Reviewed By: kokonikite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon, please! |
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! I can't believe you ended it right there! Ack! Oh, my heart! {::slumps over, then winks::} Nah, just playing. For real, this story is good. I like it. Please email me when you update. My address is SiOnErChest@aol.com! Thanks! |
Reviewed By: Dragon On: July 07, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! Update soon! PLEASE!!! If you don't update soon I'm with Blondie if she decides to kill ya! SOOO HURRY! |
Reviewed By: The Lecturess On: July 07, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Update!!!!! This is good! I'm enjoying this! Updated please! Is this an alternate scene to what really happen in the series or is something else gonna happen? |
Reviewed By: Mooney On: July 07, 2003 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i totaly love it. update soon. i hope u do. |
Reviewed By: fanatic On: July 07, 2003 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is soooooo cooooool!! I can't wait to read what happens next!!:) Hurry and update!!! pleeeeeeeeaaaaase |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 11:41 CDT
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Nice start, I can't wait to read more (^_^) |
Reviewed By: Blondie On: July 07, 2003 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You better update soon if not you are a baka grrrrr okay sorry that was suppose 2 be some of my humur ..... can ya tell?????? well please update soon!!!!!!!1 PLEASE I am loving it this is the story I have been waiting 2 read LOL thanks |
Reviewed By: Tashinia On: July 07, 2003 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! Update soon please! |
Reviewed By: Sinnamonkat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 23:22 CDT
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That was awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter. Sesshoumaru is sugoi! |
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