| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 21:12 EST
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Maybe that's why the well was nailed shut when Kagome went there the first time. Also in the first chapter of "the big story" it wasn't immediately obvious that Inuyasha was the guy who walked in and said, "Not without me."
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 19:45 EST
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Well, at least we solved that issue. I guess she is never going back to school. But Inuyasha needs to learn to control his hormones.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 19:06 EST
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Why is Inuyasha being driven nuts by Kagome's period? Her period, among humans, is supposed to be after the guy has missed his chance to father babies and the womb is cleaning house, so to speak. Heat in dogs seems to be signalling males that the females are ready to make pups, physically anyway. So why is the "cleaning house" bleeding making Inuyasha act like she's going "come hither"? It's like calling the "full moon" the "new moon" because it turned red.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 18:48 EST
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I should be seeing some worry over her returning to her time. After all, how the heck is she supposed to do all her normal things there when she looks the way she does now?
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 18:28 EST
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I didn't think a rejected kiss would be enough to change his stubborn mind. After all, he's been slapped by her for just putting his arm around her and he still chasing after her.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 18:21 EST
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If the well is no longer fuctioning, and I am starting to wonder because Kagome isn't worrying about how her folks are going to handle this, why is she still wearing a skirt? And you had the nerve to make Kagome's mother sound like she was having an affair as well. *shakes head* You definitely ran away with this.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 22:57 EST
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They are called soul collectors. These chapters move at a whirlwind rate. Though, the story is interesting.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 22:34 EST
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This was a little fast. Now how will her folks on the other side handle it and how is she going to go to school?
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Title: transformations
Reviewed By: firestar712 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fic ever it took me 3 days to read!!! u r a great lemon writer. and this fic is soo awsome u would have to be dislexic not to like this fic u should write a lot more fics this is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ja ne *sakura*
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 15:19 EDT
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Wow...this story is great...i can definatly see why it made the most vistied list. Like anyone can beat this....great job and keep updating :D:D:D:D
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Title: nice!!
Reviewed By: Angely On: August 12, 2005 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story, got sorta of lost with all the names but the overall story was very well portrayed and had a good plot nevertheless.
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Reviewed By: mrw13 On: August 09, 2005 23:51 EDT
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wow this story is sooo long that it took me 4 days to read 4DAYSto read but it was worth it great story by the way why did'nt you use a canon,pies,stinky dipers,subblimanal messages u know the kind the gov. uses to get people to join stuff,broken light bulbs/beer bottles,wood with nails in it,alens,grard dogs, nails on a chalk board,a whiny little kid that always says why after some thing you sayand stuff like that and if your wonder ing how i came up with some these suggestions than baby sit some one kids this story should get published man you'd have asellout umug inu fans and yes i suck at writing
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Reviewed By: kougakola On: August 08, 2005 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really cool though it was said when inuyasha 'died'.hey could you also get me a inu clone?
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Reviewed By: 2cute4u888 On: August 08, 2005 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a totally cool and fantastic story.
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Reviewed By: neshee On: August 07, 2005 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfic and will be waiting for sept. 3. the only thing in your story i dont like is the killer thing. you make it seem as though its inuyasha and kagome died. I dont like angst filled endings like their soulmate dies but they are going to live for them kinda crap. getting off topic, if it is inuyasha now that he killed those men will the future be changed? will they have a happily ever after? instead of being the physcomaniac he seems to be now? and if its not inuyasha who the hell is it? good story though -Ja ne
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