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Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I GIVE U A PERFECT 10~~!!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK FOR THIS AND A BLESSED CURSE. DID I GET THAT RIGHT. I PUT YOU ON MY FAVORITE AUTHORS YOU ARE SOOOOOO GREAT!!!! SESS/KAG FLUFF HEHEHE. THE EVILNESS OF BABOON PELTS *SHUDDER* HEHEHE. UPDATE AGAIN ASAP!!JA NE. |
Reviewed By: Fishfisk On: September 14, 2003 20:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't want to give you ten for everything, because that would not give you an idea of what to or not to fix. However, I found no flaws with your writing style (except for that there's not enough InuYasha. I love him so...) and your grammar and spelling were both nearly flawless, but for a typo or two. It's a fun fanfic to read and overall, I can't imagine it being better.
As for originalit and creativity- well- you got higher marks than a lot of people would, but it's hard to be creative with a fanfic, ne? Especially since so many people are writing them; because the setting and cast are the same, when plots are similar, they tend to look as if they are the same thing over and over.
However, you did a good job, especially with keeping Fluffy as in character as is possible (considering that, well, he needs some emotions for a romance.) I thought you did a quite original twist to it without abandoning Rumiko's genius storyline. Keep up the good work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: youkai_lover On: September 11, 2003 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome and kurama would go nicely with the story plot. |
Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 20:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
Very promising fanfic. I like how you slowly develope sess and kag's relationship. Most fanfics just make them fall in love right away. And i love how Sesshoumar mentally argues with himself about Kagome. Only problem that I have: Your chapters are so short! And like 1/4 of your chapters are like replies to your reviews!
Anyways...please update soon! |
Title: *all of them*
Reviewed By: Samantha On: September 07, 2003 00:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories. They are so good. I just came across them today. You are now my favorite FanFic author. Usally author dont stick with their stories and leave u hanging. I am so glad u have a love for writing. Cant wait for chapter 11. *wow it is 2:19am * I guess I got caught up reading.:)Oh I just love the way the story is going. It is so addicting.lol Bye
*sorry if it is long* |
Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 12:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aargh! I just want to jump on over there and kick some sense into Sess's head! *rolls eyes* I mean, come on! He's a reasonably intelligent being (for a male)...he should have been able to figure out that he has it bad for a certain miko. Oops! *covers mouth* Did I let out a big secret? I didn't think so! Everyone seems to realize he's on love with Kagome...except Kagome, Inuyasha ans Sess, of course. *sigh* The trials of the foolishly in love (and the simply foolish ;p)!
Really, though, this fic is great. I thought I'd put my two cents up here at MM because it's just barbaric that you only have 10 responses here. I look forward to the next chapters! |
Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 11:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you can keep the fluffyness between InuYasha and Kagome, while still building the relationship between Kagome and Seshoumaru at the same time. |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 10:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I like how you keep Inuyasha the lovable idiot without making him the bad guy, and still form kagome's relationship with fluffy. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 04:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
Cute ^^ It's too early and I've been awake too long for me to think of a decent review ;p
Oh, and about Rin's way of talking? *snickers* My own personal thoughts are that, when surrounded by speech patterns such as "kono Sesshoumaru" and "kono Jaken" she didn't have a chance. Of course, in the english version Sesshoumaru and Jaken do not use that form of speech, so Rin wouldn't speak in a similar pattern. Of course, that is just my weird explanation ^^ |
Reviewed By: adorable akane On: September 06, 2003 01:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!! I really want to know what happens next!! Ja Mata!! |
Reviewed By: Delilah On: September 05, 2003 23:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is one of the cutest Kagome/Sesshomaru stories... I love the midnight ride on true form... AHHH... |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 07:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice work ^^ The tension/anger/desire to kill between Sesshoumaru and Kouga, and Inuyasha and Kouga, was great. Having Sesshoumaru cut in because of Kagome's wishes (when Inu was going fo the kill), only to have him wish for Kouga's death moments later...was a nice touch. |
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 06:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story it's written very good i wish i cold write like this. |
Reviewed By: killinme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 01:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i like your story. it's really good. and i'm surprised that you only have 2 reviews. geeze people read then not review, even after all the chapters that you have posted. i'm shocked *o*
well anyway i just wanted to tell you that i enjoyed your sroty and i hope you update soon.
p.s i think this is the longest review i've ever written. *__*
ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i read your story on fanfiction.net and loved it i know that this is the same story so please post lemon!!! OH from fanfiction.net im sunstar-1217, Keep up the good work and Update again soon!!!
Ja Ne. |
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