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Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 18:58 CST
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i love the way you're writing the fic between present time and flashbacks! pls write more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 05:07 CST
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*sigh* when is Kagome going to wake up? though I love the flashbacks. I got the kidnapping idea from another fic i read several years ago on another topic, so credit sadly can't go to my brain alone. also i was wondering if Kikyo was going to make an apearence (or did she already and i just forget)? nehoo, up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 22:20 CST
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So that's what Shippo does best. Neat! I especailly like when you make Shippo disappear and leave or enter a room. You ened the chapter with a flash back. No fair! Don't worry I'll get over it. I like how you are telling us the story but also the past/how the characters got where they are now. Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming.
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I figured Naraku isn't behind this-- too obvious, and where's the fun in that! I suppose Shippo's special talent is all things sneaky and underhanded, good man to have on one's team. So, when do we hear from the upset mother? I remember when my sister tried to sell me at the age of 4-- LONG story-- and if Kag's reaction is anything like my mom's was, everyone look out and take cover. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 15:25 CST
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interesting that you have naraku as a good guy. True, he might just be playing a game, but still. I think that i will hold off on any guesses, since my last guessing game didn't go so well(if you're curious try reading woodin cylinders and red herrings). although i am curious about what it is that shippou does, searching for hints on the streets? good luck with the rest
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My list is fairly long--- but mostly dependent on who shows up in the story. My first guess as to the kidnappers idenity was Naraku-- ya know just cuz, but then I got to thinking, I've read about baby abductions in hospitals and usually it's someone that workes in the hospital. Please don't tell me Kikyo is a nurse. Poor Kagome, she's gonna wake up and be all sad and depressed when she should be estacally happy. But I suppose there's comfort in knowing that your husband is gonna kick the ass of the POS that stole your child from here to all the seven hells and back again. Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 02:31 CST
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So was it Naraku or Kouga? i can't think that Kouga whould do something like that, so my guess is Naraku. He could raise her as his own and then anounce who she is when her loyalties are secured with him. then when she becomes hair to the thrown, Naraku would have a major advantige. That's my guess. keep up the good work and up date soon!!
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Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 16:51 CST
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i like a lot the relationship between Inu & Fluffy ...naraku isnt what he seems, is he? write more pls!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 00:38 CST
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This is a really good story, I hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 19:36 CST
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Smells like the beginings of another great story. Loved the part about InuYasha wanting to kill them himself, definatly in character. And I wonder what it is Shippo does best. This is new for me I usually don't read stories that deal with the Inu gang's offspring but I like your writing so I'll give it a go.
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who stole their baby??? this is an amazing fic so far. update!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 01:48 CST
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mm, please continue. i think i'm hooked now. up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 22:16 CST
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Cmon, cmon, cmon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls come back soon!! this fic is so good so far!!
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Reviewed By: Step of Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please update update update
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffs* I feel so bad for them!! That abductor is gonna get their ass kicked to the seven hells and back. I wonder though who did it. I mean I have a list of potential suspects in my head, but I guess I'm just gonna have to wait and see. UPDATE SOON!!!
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