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Title: KILL HOJO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha1991 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KILL HOJO HE DISERVES TO DIE >>>>>>> UNLIKE WHAT KAGOME SAID >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> TO BAD YOU DIDNT MAKE INUYASHA KICK HIS A$$ ....... well gotta go byebye
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 15:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!! great job Hiromaru!! i still love it!! before you post you should re-read you chapters though, to make sure they make sense. okay?? Keep going!!
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Reviewed By: KANERG2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok needs a pinch action though
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Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 22:45 EST
Comment/Review:
love it! plz update soon! porr sota!
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Reviewed By: LIL ANGEWL On: February 27, 2004 19:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE I REALLY LIKE UR FIC, SO PLEASE UPDATE! AN TELL INU I LOVE HIM!(EARS..SO CUTE...MUST RUB....) N E WAYS I THINK U SHOULD PUT SOME OF UR REVIEWERS UP AN THANK THEM PERSONALLY. IT REALLY MAKES REVIEWS COME IN. AN I'LL REVIEW AS OFTEN AS POSSIBLE, BUT IM NOT ON THE NET OFTEN.. SOOO PARDON THE LONG INTERVALS.^.^;;
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Reviewed By: mental On: February 26, 2004 21:58 EST
Comment/Review:
Hello, ok somehow I just read your first eight chapters in about half n hour and I loved your fanfic.I had a feeling that Inuyasha was good with kids.Well since Sota didn't die (that's why my mom tells me anb my brother to look both ways before we cross the steet that and I almost got run over many times I know running me over is some kind of game for drivers the fist one that hits me gets all his or her speeding tikets paid for)how about you make the next one as funny as posible(not that your other chapters aren't funny).Oh I know make Inuyasha put red Kool-Aid in the shower head and when Kagome turns on the shower she thinks that she's bathing in blood and then she finds out what Inuyasha did and gets back at him by reeplacing his oatmeal with Buyo's wet kitty litter(you have one gues to find out how it got wet it rhymes with cat wee)and then he tee-pees her house and she reeplaces his lemonade with his piss and he reeplaces Kagome's homework with a bunch of paper that says "my teacher eats shit" and she puts pot in Inuyasha's backpack and he puts beer in her milk and she lies to the police that Inuyasha is a drug dealer and the Kagome's mom grounds them for pissing each other off.Well that's only a few ideas for you now I gotta go 'cuz I'm gonna kick m doctors ass for prescribing me steroids.Bye bye(^_^)
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Title: Good story, bad puntuation
Reviewed By: Anonymousxxxx On: February 25, 2004 21:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look, this is good. The only real problem is the spelling!! Please try to use spell checker or tell someone to revise it. That way, everyone can enjoy your fic. Other than that, it is really good.
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Reviewed By: 3 fire girl On: February 25, 2004 19:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey Hiromaru it's me sheamaru, i didn't want to sign in so i'm using my nick name. I still love your story it's wonderul and your a great writer!!! i just wanted to say hi and good luck with the non-reviewers. happy hunting hiromaru, and you too Inuyasha
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Title: i really llike it
Reviewed By: Gizmo Gurl On: February 23, 2004 19:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got done reading this fic, and I have to say, I really like it.( just giving credit where credit is due)You did make quite a few misstakes, but that happens to all of the great writers! So don't just leave me hanging! *hanging on a branch coming from a cliff* (Hello? Is anyone there?) I'm kind of weird huh? Oh well, can't choose your fans right? Bye!
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Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I can't beleive that long review you got! I disagree with it!!! I think your story is absolutely great and I can't wait to read more!!! i really like your story!!! Well, plz continue writing!!! huggles and smiles Ray
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Reviewed By: Hiromaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 22:20 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I didn't get more chapters up yet . You see what happened was.............my computer...um..caught a virus...yeah thats it a virus . And because of that I couldn't add the others chappies . But they WILL be up tomorrow . PROMISE.
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Reviewed By: crazy person On: February 12, 2004 15:47 EST
Comment/Review:
well, great story!!!!!!!!!! but i definately think that you could work on your spacing.
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Title: 'ello
Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 21:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Hiromaru. Great story I love it. We should kill your non reviewers too. Aw heck, lets just kill them all!! Inuyasaha? Inuyasha: yes? Sheamaru: May I borrow the Tetsugia? I'll take good care of it. Inuyasha: Oh yeah, like last time? Sheamaru: Noooooo (remembers when she dropped the Tetsugia in the river and had to follow it down stream where a waterfall waitied) Inuyasha: Fine but if it get damaged- Sheamaru: Um, you'll kill me? Inuyasha: Right (give Tetsugia to Shemaru) Sheamaru: Thank you (walks off)
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Title: so far so good
Reviewed By: Sakura712 On: February 11, 2004 08:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, you should try to make it a bit more romantic.... and also, don't put that much swear words.... but the plot it good! keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiromaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 00:37 EST
Comment/Review:
thanx
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