| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 13
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 (too lazy yadda yadda) On: April 14, 2004 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I told you I love this story yet? I can't remember...probably but still I love it...its great! Oh shit...oh shit...Sess knows...OH SHIT! Ok oh yeah I wanted to comment on the detail you put in your story and your storyline...its absolute perfection. Oh Oh and I love the background you put into Sess and Inu's pass about their parents and stuff it gives your story depth and depth is good. On to the next chappy...i am sorry for not getting to the story till now. ~Inuyashas princess17
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 12
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 (too lazy to sign in) On: April 14, 2004 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheessh I hadn't realized I missed so many chapters...I am sorry. Oooo I hope rin gets so good at her new weapon, she be able to impress sess maybe just a tad bit. But oh crap now sess is going to know something is up with Rin tapping into his power and all. Yikes...im going to the next chappy! ~Inuyashas princess17
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 14, 2004 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a great story please update soon! i love it !!
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Title: Ch.15
Reviewed By: sesshorin On: April 14, 2004 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you write GREAT action scenes! Sesshomaru really is mean, and crazy too. I don't see why Inuyasha would ask his friends to follow Sesshomaru or how they could have caught up with him though. But it's a very exciting chapter! More soon....
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Reviewed By: madartiste@yahoo.com On: April 12, 2004 20:12 CDT
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Oh, goodness! How'd I miss these new chapters? Looks like things are starting to really roll now! I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Sorry to hear about the issues with the weather. I know how frustrating it can be. Well, I'm looking forward to reading more - and if you still need a beta reader, I'd be happy to volunteer!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 00:41 CDT
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What a talent! I greatly appreciate the way you are depicting Sesshoumaru: Not the suddenly sappy, soft-hearted love-struck fool (which is very gratifying, also), but a demon conflicted by his own instincts, ego, and neeed for love. Sugoi! I'm also happy to see someone who does research. I have some different information on Japanese armor, but I cannot narrow down a specific time period for it so...*shrug* I am rattling on, and not telling you what I wanted to. I have never considered myself a Rin/Sesshoumaru fan, as I have had difficulty imagining Rin as a grown woman. The entire idea smacked of incest---until I read this. Thank you for helping me expand my horizons! Tsugi no maki wa otanoshimi ni shite imasu kara, ne. Ganbatte kudasai!
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Title: Ch.14
Reviewed By: sesshorin On: April 07, 2004 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice surprise for Inuyasha! There will be a lot of action in the next chapters? All right!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally you are back. i was wondering what happen to you. i hate it when the weather plays a part of you not having interest access. i had that problem also before i had dsl. good chapter by the way. i can't wait to see sess's reaction to rin with her new appearance. i just can't wait until the chapter where he realizes that he is in love with her as much as she is in love with him. hope you will update soon. =]
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Title: Brotherly love?
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sess sneaking into bed with Inu? lol, gives new meaning to the term "sleeping with the enemy." Another great chapter as always ^__^ Serious subjects handled with a pinch of humor. And, yeah, action is a lot harder to write than angst. Thoughts and emotions are easy to convey, but to actually make them DO something . . . But you did it before, and I have no doubt that you'll successfully do it again. I'll look forward to your next update :)
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 00:15 CST
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That chapter was awesome! Yeah, I love it when Sess loses his cool ^__^
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Title: Ch.13
Reviewed By: sesshorin On: April 01, 2004 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this chapter, especially Bokuseno talking about Rin and clueing Sesshomaru in on what's going on!! Oh boy, Sessho going psycho! But he's going to look for Rin at last! Great stuff! On a side note, what Sesshomaru has should be youki, not jyaki, unless you want him evil. I used to think jyaki was just an alternate spelling of youki, but I came upon this on a message board: Jyaki - evil aura Youki - youkai's aura So, Sesshoumaru has youki, but Naraku has jyaki.
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Reviewed By: ......... On: April 01, 2004 01:37 CST
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Ahh! You tease.... Please update soon, your story's adictive.
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Title: Hurray for Mediaminer!
Reviewed By: ManonLeChat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thank goodness you're posting this on both sites. I haven't been able to sign on to ff.net this evening, and I wanted to read your latest chapter hot off the press (or, at least, warm computer screen). Great chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the touching, "brotherly love" reunion between Inuyasha and Sess next chapter. ^_^ I'm with you in the excitement over getting my hands on Movie 3, I've heard there are great action sequences with both Sess AND Rin. Please update soon, although I can understand the tedious necessity of earning a pay check... Sigh. :-) Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please tell me he won't use the sword on rin and watch her die! for the love of kami please don't let the mad driven sessy do that to rin! i think that is one of the scariest thing on earth, a guy going mad! now u got me all excited about the third movie. maybe someone from japan will be selling a copy of it on ebay during june. oh im looking forward to june. u also got me all excited about this story. now im all anxious to see what happens next. you just keep me guessing! i hope work won't be such a workload so u can update for us! heheheh =]
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Title: Ch.12
Reviewed By: sesshorin On: March 29, 2004 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Totosai, worrying over Rin! I hope Sesshomaru won't hurt him or destroy too much of his stuff when he comes back. I'm glad that Rin's found a weapon and the power that hopefully she can tap into in a fight. I found very few typo or spelling errors in your chapters, occasionally one appears but that happens to everyone who uses a computer. I don't think you need a beta reader for that, but I'm speaking only as a reader impatiently waiting for the next update. Anyway, it's another great chapter from you! Looking forward to Mr. Denial further coming apart... heheheh....
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