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"Games, Gifts and Interruptions" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ]
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 Reviewed By: SomaliChan  On: August 22, 2004 11:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
It seems that you are not taking the three way route though I would love for it to be so. I don;t know but Wufei didn't quite portray Duo in a very positive light. Sigh........I like your Duo much better than I like Wufei. His ideas of getting Heero to act like his other admirers seem replusive to me. *sigh* Then again you're the author! *grins* More onegai?
 Reviewed By: fancyfree  On: August 16, 2004 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
With the way you've set this story up, there can't realistically be an everyone is happy ending. Duo expressed his desire for both Heero and Wufei and they, in their way, are rejecting him. I can't see any way he could stay in the house with them. I hope you don't solve the problem by having Zechs come in and Duo fall for him; that's a senario used over and over and I think it's a cop-out. I don't really see a temper tantrum from Duo, but a sense of rejection. I can't see how Heero is going to be able to have his cake and eat it too. Duo will be hurt at his decision (anyone would) and their relationship won't be the same, at least, if your story follows a logical line, it shouldn't be. I Look forward to reading your solution.
 Reviewed By: Its me Kico (not signed in)  On: August 13, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I STILL REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Izabella  On: August 03, 2004 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, the story is great and it has everything to go 1x2x5, or better yet, 1x5x2 or 5x1x2. 'Cause I personally wouldn't like if Duo was to end up with Neko and I also really like threesomes. That's all for now. Keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: Izabella  On: August 02, 2004 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, the story is getting really good and in my opinion it has everything to go 1x2x5 or better yet 1x5x2 or 5x1x2, I'd rather have the three together than have Duo with Neko. No offense but I really like threesomes. Think about it, and keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: Izabella  On: August 02, 2004 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, the story is getting really good and in my opinion it has everything to go 1x2x5 or better yet 1x5x2 or 5x1x2. Think about it and keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: Izabella  On: August 02, 2004 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, the story is getting really good and in my opinion it has everything to go 1x2x5 or better yet 1x5x2 or 5x1x2. Think about it and keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: Izabella  On: August 02, 2004 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, the story is getting really good and in my opinion it has everything to go 1x2x5 or better yet 1x5x2 or 5x1x2. Think about it and keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: Trowa's Tenshi  On: August 02, 2004 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! it's very well written. I really hope you make it a 1x2x5...the way Heero wants to talk to Duo seems like it could be a good start for making it a threesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: nekoi1999  On: July 20, 2004 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
duo and neko... will they really finish together b'cause I think but that my opinion of yaoi fan that u should finish this story in a 1x2x5 or even better 2x5x1or 5x2x1 but het just like I say that my yaoi crazy fan. but do continue the story it good so far and does have potential
 Title: IT'S ME KICO!!!
Reviewed By: Kico Yushimi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2004 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ITS STILL THE BEST STORY I'VE READ IN A WHILE!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!
 Title: ME AGAIN!!!!
Reviewed By: Kico Yushimi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2004 13:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holy i'm the only one reviewing thats not good but anyway i still LOVE the story and i want to read MORE please update soon!!!!!!!
 Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Kico Yushimi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 03, 2004 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story sooooooooo much please please please update as soon as you can i really want to know what happens ^_~
 Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Kico Yushimi [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 02, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please update again i really like this story!!!^_^
 Title: So Kool
Reviewed By: Kico Yushimi [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2004 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please Review soon i thought it was so good i loved it and i wanna know what happens so review pretty please!! ^_^
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