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Reviewed By: InuSessRoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job, hope you update soon, au revior mon ami! ~*let the sun and the moon dance, with the sparkles of the night...*~ ~*InuSessRoxx*~
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 08:03 CDT
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Well I'm hooked! I must admit the I liked the plot straight off but it was amazing what you have done with the idea. I can just imagine some of the possible happenings that couldoccur in the story in addition to the one you have already stated. And Sango is pregnant, I don't know any other story that started out like that. Originality points for you. But I like the easy feeling you projected between all 3 of them. It actually feels like they are old friends instead of us (the reader) assuming. InuYasha. InuYasha. Getting caught on purpose just to see the princess. I think it is sweet since I know him but in today's times that is stalking, dog boy! I wonder why he never swiped a few coins before the tossed him in the dungon and why the guards didn't realize the same guy keeps breaking out and getting captured day after day...Oh well. He is about to find out that just because you can wish/lust for it doesn't mean you really want it. I think Kagome's part is cute. She keeps flustering him. (Something he doesn't usually do but it is so funny!)I also noticed that her real personality keeps leaking out. When will InuYasha wish to make her speak her mind since she obviously won't do it herself. I am also interugied about the rules this litte stardust wishbringer is bound to and how she came to be. I know you'll get to so I'll just wait. Oh, loved her outfit. I see you put a twist on the usual geine attire. Goodness wrote to much. Sorry. I can't wait for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 19:18 CDT
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cool
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 12:21 CDT
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This fic is great so far! But to me, Kagome, is acting really weird and childish! Kind of makes it funny though...anyway loved it so please update again when you can! :)
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 19:59 CDT
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kag seems a lil bipolar. troubled past perhaps? anywho, love it! love it! love it! love it! cant wait till next update!!!
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Reviewed By: Skiddy16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Chapter. was kinda annoyed at how submissive kag was but all things have an answer. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 17:30 CDT
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Yes!! You updated!! *Tackles you -- HUGGLES!!* I absolutely looooove it!!! xD This is... my favourite fic!! =D Hmm... Kagome is stardust, eh? What is this... Stardust...? But is Kagome real? What does Inuyasha want? This IS Inu/Kag... right?! Then what's up with the whole Kikyo deal? Is Kikyo going to be nice or mean? Or... by the time Inuyasha gets her, she's already married/engaged?! Will this be a love triangle? Kagome's outfit... I'm still sort of confused by it. So, it's pretty much red, right? She has a veil. Jewellry. Baggy pants (like Inu's?). A dragon-shaped belt holding up her pants... -__-;; Er. And... what? That's it, right? O_O ... I wish I had a scanner. That was off topic. Well... my head is buzzing and I wish that you could update at... the speed of... light? Sound? The speed of... stardust! Okay, now I'm just feeling high. It's probably that coffee cake I just had. ^_^ Well, anyway, please update soon -- I look foward to reading the next chapter! XD (And the one after that... and the one after that one... and etc...)
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Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 16:48 CDT
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ach..i forgot to ask, Can u post a link to the fanart on next chapter? or email it to me at kirei_kurama@yahoo.com? id appreciate it if u did ^^ and i LOVE this story! so please update sooon!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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omg! i love this story!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! IT SOO GOOODDD!!! and inu had better get w/ kag!! or ill..ill..do SOMETHING!
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Reviewed By: nauriell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 16:18 CDT
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Did you ever watch 'I Dream of Jeannie'? Cause Kagome really reminds me of Jeannie in that chapter (did i spell that right??? *looks around inconspicuously*) anyway, if you've never watched it before...that's kind of scary with the uberly creepy similarities, but you should watch it somethime. they play it on TV land...if you get that channel.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Call me a pervert, but the way Kagome is acting could be a fantasy of Miroku's or Inuyasha. Anyway, Great story so far. I wonder whats going to happen next ^__^
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Reviewed By: chibi-inuyasha-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 22:18 CDT
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hehe... this is so... FUNNY! i tried a fic like this and it turned out horrible! but you do and EXCELLENT job of wring and nothing can go wrong with Maiden of the Moon writing!!! awesomeness!!! keep it up!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 22:18 CDT
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I nearbly combusted due to frustration. *Siiiigh*...excuse this little...ramble...: WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT THERE?! HOW COULD YOU!!??!?! WHY THERE!? YOU JUST HAD TO LEAVE IT THERE?!!?!? Okay. I'm good now. Just... ignore that. Well, I'm just trying to say I love this story to BITS, so update soon, I will...email you every 3 hours to update! >___> I'm serious! Dead serious!! ...=) What?
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Reviewed By: Skiddy16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 22:12 CDT
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I'm absolutely in love with this story. When i first read the summary i was like: Rozefire? then i read it and was like: sweet! Loved it. update soon. Chandra16
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 19:35 CDT
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COOL! i like it already! cant wait till the next update
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