| "Seasons of Sorrow" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Teddy Bear On: April 15, 2005 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this ia a really good fan fic. It is so fun to read. One of my favorite things is that Kyo is teaching Tohru martial arts. The way that part is writte nand the idea are totally awsome.
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Reviewed By: cheekynezumi-chan On: January 17, 2005 13:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Any more room for another reviewer? I had some questions and comments swimming around in my head so here they are. First off its nice to see a yuki centric fic for once and one that has a nice style of writing too!^_^ I'm especially impressed with your writing skills seeing as english is not your first language. But one thing I must ask is that you please stop using & and just write out the actual word and when you write something that other readers might not know like a japenese word, it woul be better to write a explaination at the end of the chapter instead of in parenthese. Those kind of things makes your writing look juvenile. With that said I can't wait for your next chapter! P.S. Are you using the japenese manga reference of Akito? And will there be any alone-time between Yuki and Tohru?
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Title: awesome!!
Reviewed By: Emily V. On: January 16, 2005 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, i just wanted to tell you that i love your fanfic very much. You know how to make the viewer laugh and cry and feel warm and fuzzy inside. It is very well written and I loved how you blended the song in at the end of chapter 6. Very nice work, i hope to see a new chapter soon! I will keep reviewing!!
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