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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: October 11, 2004 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOW it's getting interesting. Kagome being Hiei's surregate mother when he was a child. PLEASE continue to update this one as soon as you can. I'm just dying to know how Kagome's going to explain this to Hiei and the others. I was also wondering if you'll change the rating to R. Because this story looks like it would make good for that kind of rating. Please answer my review in the next chapter, because I don't have e-mail anymore. And like I asked before, Please update soon. X's & O's
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Reviewed By: fox3290 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love This story write more
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Reviewed By: Clutzoid On: September 30, 2004 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sssooooooooo your gonna keep going right (puppy eyes) pppplllllllleeeeeaaaaaaasssssseeeee
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: solqua [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awwww, so cute, i love it
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: September 24, 2004 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Much likes please do update soon this story is so Kwaii (Cute) could you e-mail me when you update? My e-mail is Mistic_me_@hotmail.com Anyways update soon.Bye!
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
holly chickens! this story is wounderfull! please update soon! eveil cliffy die! ...giggle... this is too good, think the two hieis are gonna merge or something when they see each other!? please update soon, i can't stop laughing, this is just to good. if you can e-mail me when you update, winter_solstce@sbcglobal.net
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Reviewed By: ewunia On: September 23, 2004 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the story. It is great. Please continue and I hope for more interaction between them. Wonder what happened when Kagome disapeared. And how Shippo and Hiei got separated.
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Reviewed By: ewunia On: September 23, 2004 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story is great. you changed a second chapter a little I see. Please continue
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