| "Saiyan Games" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: October 27, 2001 20:21 CDT
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I should be working but here I am with a dopey grin on my face as I finish the last chapter of this story and go, "Awwww" when I discover that it's over. The thought of using the VR game was a master-stroke, although I don't believe for a minute that Bulma would have mastered the game on her first time and actually beaten Vegeta. Not-A-Chance! That's my only gripe - An additional chapter should have been written as they got used to one another in the cyberworld. It would have heightened the tension and V's expectations but...What's done is done. This was a very well written story and obviously thought out. I'm looking very forward to any others that you post up! |
Reviewed By: hibari heza On: October 28, 2001 16:32 CST
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Oh! That was a great story! If you're going to do a sequel then I can't wait to read it. |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks On: November 04, 2001 16:10 CST
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This was a very nice fic. Bulma and Vegeta fics are my favorite! I was kind of surprised when Bulma beat him in that game though, I mean, the Prince of Saiyans beat by a lowly human?! A miracle in it's self! |
