| "Cheaters" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: KaoX2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 14:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, up to the TK/Nancy chapter, it was very good... Thank god it was only a dream. And Davisfan, read a few Yamato/Takeru stories/lemons, plus a few featuring Yamato and his dad, or one I saw of Yamato with Taichi's dad. This is normal compared to those. Also, R80 never said he liked the idea, TankCop was the inspiration (I believe I read his story also.) |
Reviewed By: Davisfan On: September 11, 2002 17:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel ill. I was going to apologize for having that fight in your reviews. But now.........no. No apology, and I had developed respect for you taking it down. But now..........no. I can understand characters being OOC, but this is sick and perverted. I've read hundreds upon hundreds of different fics, and this is one of three that make me sick. Congrats, you just made a guy who was laughed at 'The Exorcist' when he was six barf his guts up. Excuse me*Burp*! |
Reviewed By: TakeruG On: September 06, 2002 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know that you're evil ? But being evil doesn't mean being bad... it's a funny fanfic you wrote this far. I only miss a Yamajun-part...
~TakeruG~ |
Reviewed By: :::KFT::: On: June 30, 2002 12:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cool enjoyed pls make a chapter 10 thanks!
signed,
::KFT:: |
Reviewed By: CF3 On: June 27, 2002 23:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
O_o! HOLY FREAKIN SHIZNILTS! Woah, Rob...looks like all the characters are playas...haha. I like the odd-couples! Go ahead and switch some more! Such as: Michi, err, uh, Soshiro (hehe I'm weird), uhm...now who is unlikely to be with Kari? I dunno. Go pick! Write some more! Or I'll sick Ria on you! |
Reviewed By: digiobsessedfanatic On: April 03, 2002 21:10 PST
Comment/Review:
no no nooooooooo....*cries* tk and kari..how sad...oh btw..how do you get such dirty ideas out of a cartoon thats meant for 10 yr olds? |
Reviewed By: leadfoot352 On: April 25, 2002 10:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
this is NOT a flaim i like mizy (mimixizzy) Izzy sonds like an @$$ |
Reviewed By: Mimi girl On: January 05, 2002 21:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a cool fic... will there be any mimato? or more michi?
hey, by the way... is matt like, an moron or something in the story? |
Reviewed By: Rocker_Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 20:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man oh man..... ::sniffles:: Poor Kari and TK... So many misunderstandings, leading into no Takari possibly... ::sniff sniff:: Well, I hope it works out for them at least, but then, I am playing favorites with them. ^_^ But seriously, good job, Rob, glad to see another series of yours. laters!!
Rocker_Starlight ^_^ |
Reviewed By: raine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2001 21:13 PST
Comment/Review:
I dunno if I'm doing this right, never reviewed anything at this site before. Anyway, this was a great chapter! Takari lust, gotta love it!....raine |
Reviewed By: ArchangelBloodraven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2001 06:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(ARCH is found bruised and bloody)
Arch: I got your warning a little too late Rob. I do hope you enjoyed the gifts. I wasnsn't able to finish the sailor moon fic because the computer crashed.
TK and Kari: There he is! Get him!
Arch: Starting my christmas fic. Do let me know if you and your gang are stopping by for the holidays.
(TK and KARI begin beating the life and soul out of ARCH)
Kari: (Sweetly) Oh robster...
YOU'RE NEXT! |
Reviewed By: Demonite09 On: October 28, 2001 18:54 PST
Comment/Review:
Nicely done, keep em comming |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 31, 2001 17:15 PST
Comment/Review:
Good fic. Plze continue I hope it'll end Takari n Taiora and Mimato.. |
Reviewed By: A-man On: November 04, 2001 08:09 PST
Comment/Review:
This is a very well writen story I've read some of your other works and would have to say that this might be your best. So please continue with the fic and try to help out Davis since he is the only one that hasn't gotten into the story really. |
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