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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:29 CST
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so cute!!! i hope he makes her his girl friend soon. and awwwwwwwwww i loved it! awww hope you got better from that flu of yours. uhhhhhhhhhhh oh and good job on the chapter it was really good. and uhhhhhhhhhh update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: star963852 On: March 29, 2005 21:26 CST
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hey love this story i cant wait to see what happens next coud u update soon please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 21:51 CST
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Heeyy, that was sooooo cool, I wonder what happens next...so please update sooooon!! also i really loved how kagome had fallen a sleep on Inuyasha later in the basement..anywho plz write more..and soon..lol..
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Reviewed By: mdoadoy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved how kagome had fallen a sleep on Inuyasha later in the basement, it was so cute X3 but I feel bad for koga, not only he's been made fun of, but he's also been rejected... ^^' but I really enjoy reading it, plz write more >< I'll be updating time to time ^^
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Reviewed By: Little_Liz On: March 27, 2005 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeyy, that was sooooo cool, I wonder what happens next...so please update sooooon!! BYE
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: not signed in aka sesshy_lil_slut On: March 27, 2005 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its so good please keep writing! ps i hate kikyou so freaking much same as kouga. oooooooo wonder whats gonna happen in the. mor.ning?
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Title: PS....
Reviewed By: yumemiru/AMANDA On: March 10, 2005 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PS.... I was talking about editing the second chapter one my first review ^.~
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Title: ^.~ AWESOME
Reviewed By: yumemiru/AMANDA On: March 10, 2005 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!! First chapter was awesome... But I have one small request...can you make it like the first so I can read it beter? I .> just woundering... ^^ (&) keep up the good work!!!!! ::hugs::
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Reviewed By: Z On: March 02, 2005 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! i love this story please update soon ill definetly read it!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwww so cute! i've read stories like this in the past but the plot never seem to bore me. i love it. hope you write more =) OoOoOoO swimsuits. but i kinda think inuyasha and kags hooked together quickly.. i mean kissing eachother quickly and yeah BUT STILL I LOVE IT! =)
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Reviewed By: kaiku7194 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think u should go on!!! add more chapters!!!! it's great!!! email me pls its: azn_babe56@hotmail.com thnx!!!!
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Reviewed By: someperson123 On: March 01, 2005 18:36 CST
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kagome and inuyasha wont get together that fast right? i dont wanna see kagome get hurt yet...
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Reviewed By: huHu_huggiez On: March 01, 2005 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow inuyasha your a playa!! i think you should get kikyou in this story. make kagome all jealous!! Woow that would be cool
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Title: Nice job updata soon
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story you really made the characters kool and not tollay different from the show. Miroku the same Sess. is alittle different nicer in a way you have not written a lot about him that's kool i like Inuyasha and Kagome together better anyway's. The style of your writting is different but it also needs inprovements but at least you know them that is good but you should try to fix that. You also make Inuyasha very very hot i like that please updata soon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that's great someone slaping Kouga! lmao well anywho keep up the good work and update again soon please? and you might wanna fix chappy 2 it's kinda hard to read all smushed all up together! well update again soon pleasE?
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