| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: jlucpitard On: September 03, 2009 16:04 PDT
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Really enjoyed how they opened up to each other in this chapter. The plot's moved forward a scootch although that would be my only complaint. It seems like we have to trade off hot sex for plot movement. Both are wonderfully done, but rarely at the same time (exception being the time they were in the building on her shrine). This is a tiny complaint since I like the slow pace of the story over all. Great work as usual!
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 00:37 PDT
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i have to say, i adore this story. i don't read much Inuyasha fanfic anymore, but i always come back to this one. thanks for continuing to write it :)
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 01:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing chapter, regardless of what your author's note said =] I love this chapter. I wonder if your going where I think your going with this story, since i re read the chapters because of your editing I took into account that one of the people in court had mentioned the shrine possibly harboring a fugitive and then in this chapter she made him promise he would put himself and his life above that of the shrine and his clients. So I wonder maybe I'm getting way over my head and thinking to much into in, but its seems like your setting the stage. Once again amazing chapter ^__^ update soon
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Reviewed By: star555555528(NSI) On: August 31, 2009 21:36 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THIS IS FREAKING AMAZING! I THINK I CRIED A LOT SO PLEASE UPDATE SO I CAN SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: August 31, 2009 10:49 PDT
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I must say, I put off reading this story for two years because I wasn't expecting it to be much more than smut. With a title like that, it's hard to imagine that it would be an in depth story like this. The depth you go into this world, it's legal system and schools... It makes me want to read more and more. I'm sorry you ran into health problems, though it probably increased your knowledge in the health care areas. Miroku's punishment did fit the crime, but he must have been toning it down, because 5 years is awful long for sexual harassment. I really like the portrayal of Sango. I don't want to ask any of the questions running through my head because I'm worried you might actually answer them instead of just letting the story unfold. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very happy with the way this chapter came out, though as an author I can understand what you probably mean...if you have an idea you know you want to do and then it just isn't cooperating. Regardless, what you actually produced was just fine in my opinion, and I'm very pleased to hear that the next chapter is also nearly ready to go. I know you're doing your best to post this story despite your personal circumstances, and I applaud your dedication as well as your creativity. Okay...that completes my sophisticated and somewhat bland review, now allow me to elaborate... I LOVE this story and can't wait to read more!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 04:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagome is putting all this effort for inuyasha... good that kagome and inuyasha get to spend more time together... and now inuyasha made a promise to kagome... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the first thing I said when I realise that you had up dated (when off line so my brother could play his stupid Xbox with his friends on line with out any glitches) is "I /HAVE/ to go on the internet." Another fantastic 2 chapters!
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Reviewed By: LordRandallsLady [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story for a while and was so happy to get the update alert today. You may not be totally satisfied with this chapter, but I loved it. Your writing style is flawless and the story is addicting. Looking forward to what's to come.
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 20:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your very welcome, I am very happy to help you keep up the motivation to continue this story. Since it is one of my favorites I am happy do something to help out. So Inuyasha must have been really badly hurt to still be healing several days later. In the manga he fought Sesshomaru after getting a hand through the gut and kept fighting. So for him to still be affected three days later, it must have been really severe. Maybe now Inuyasha will start to more seriously entertain Kagome's offer. After all, earlier in his life, he didn't have much to live for, now he has Kagome and hopefully that will motivate him to show more self-preservation. Thanks again for another great chapter! I hope you are doing well and I shall eagerly await the next update. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: JRMaxwell On: August 27, 2009 17:27 PDT
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Tease
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Reviewed By: AP On: August 17, 2009 09:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and have been following it since it first started. I hope you've not given up on it, it's very enjoyable and I'm extremely interested to see what happens next. I hope you'll be able to update at some point soon!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2009 18:59 PDT
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...i just went through all of the storys i had favorited, and i deleted all those who had not updated since may... i kept only this one... its really good. i enjoy it... and i would like to continue reading it... it will be a while before i do another clean up, but if you still havent updated by then ill give up hope on you... please dont make me lose hope...
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Reviewed By: Ditany [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2009 19:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story, I hope we get some new chapters soon. There is one thing about this story, if nothing else you have an incredible vocabulary. Good work, it is hard to find well written stories with such extensive use of the language. Hope you are doing better.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2009 20:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it waiting for next chapter. But you probly heard that a lot! I really enjoyed this fanfic
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