| "Everbody Breaks" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iloved this,its great.There are a few grammatical and spelling errors but not bad enough to be distracting or anything. Please hurry and update A.S.A.P. Cant wait for the next chapter...oh, and keep up the good work. TaTa
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Title: *^_^*
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: June 30, 2005 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you write another chapter to this story....you will be my hero for the rest of my life *^_^* i really enjoy this story and dont want it to end! >_< keep it up please i will beg if need be! ^_~` awesome job! cant wait to see more *hint hint*
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Title: Definitely
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 12:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Anoter part ad better write more soon... sorry te letter after te letter after f and before i on tis keyboard doesnt work.
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY! Please put up the next part soon! I've been looking every where for a fic like this. I hope you update this soon! -Till Then!
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Reviewed By: unicorn1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
this a really good fic. Plase keep writing ^_^
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Reviewed By: Niere [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 10:39 CDT
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I never would have thought of the high wire. I'd figured that with Wufei's "stillness" and courage, so much like Trowa's, that he would play 'target' for Catherine. It makes sense, though, using the high wire to sharpen balance skills for martial arts. Well done! Keep going, please? Niere
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Reviewed By: JupitorKnight On: June 24, 2005 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed this work that you've done and plan to put myself on the list to be notified when you update. I think you should do a sequal again. In fact i think that you should do one chapter when he gets to sleep with one pilot at a time and then another fivesome chapter. and what i mean is one chapter per pilot.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this! Please continue... i reeally want to see how the class goes. i hope he learns something.
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Reviewed By: LadyOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic so far, please continue it. (more hentai please!!!!! ^_^ after all, 1x2x3x4x5 has room for so many possibilities)
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Niere [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting and enjoyable story. I like the "pairings". Most fics pair 2 or 3, and most tend to leave out poor Wufei, or pair him with Sally. I really like the idea of all 5 of the guys together. I am adding this story to my favorites list in hopes that you will continue. Please do! Niere
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Reviewed By: Cero Morrigan On: June 23, 2005 10:44 CDT
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I would definetly enjoy more of this story. It's well written and with few mistakes mechanically
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