Beyblade Fan Fiction ❯ Oh! Captain, my captain ❯ chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )

Hello!! This is my first fic about Beyblade. It's yaoi, and it's a Kai x Max fic. I like this couple, but there are so little fics about them… You could think it's a strange pairing, but personally I thought that Kai x Tyson is a strange pairing I don't understand, but everyone is free to think what he wants. Kai and Ray, yes I could because they are the two most beautiful characters of the team but I prefer Kai with Max.

All you have to know is that this story takes place after the American tournament and the team is always complete.

Oh, English isn't my mother tongue, so please forgive my bad English, I do my best.

Oh! Captain, my captain

Chapter 1

The captain burden became too heavy to me. It seems that I only good to play beyblade. In a way my life is summed up to that. Beyblade training, thinking about new beyblade tactics, playing beyblade matches, training again, and eventually thinking about making Dranzer stronger. Finally I'm the perfect captain when you speak about beyblade because I'm the worst person you could find about human emotions.

They all are here, they are training as I convinced them, well threatened them is more exact. I'm always cold, I have never a kind word to encourage them, that's me the cold emotionless Kai whom life turns only around beyblade. I'm bored of this; I would like to show them who I'm really am. But am I someone else than that torturer who pushes them to work?

It's Ray who coaches them. He had to be captain not me. He is able to rise their moral when they need it, to laugh with them, but when we speak about beyblade he immediately regains his serious. Basically he is a little like me; it's certainly because of that I could have discussions civilised with him.

At Ray's side are Tyson and Kenny. I always wonder why we must always take on the "chief". A good beyblader is able to take care alone of his top, same thing with his strategies, but I think Tyson is too immature to understand it.

What can I say about Tyson apart that it is Tyson, I think that summarises what I think. He isn't a bad player but he is so unnerving, so self-assure even if he is only a rookie. I often wish another team beats him to make him shut up but it wouldn't be good for the team. I definitively make a bad captain. If only I know why M. Dickenson chose him, I mean his true reasons not the far-reaching player.

To finish there is Max. I admire Max. I know very well he isn't the overexcited teen, always happy, he shows us. How could you be happy when your parents are separated and you don't see your mother? I'm well placed to understand what it is to live without your family. He is able to appreciate the present time without thinking about his problems contrary to me. Sometimes I would like to be like him perhaps without his stupid air.

It's a good team, they get on well, they are strong each one with a powerful beast even if Ray is the better one. Tyson is too impulsive; he had chance with him if it works great to him. Max' case is different, he is the weakest of the team but he listens advises and works hard. What I am doing with them? It's evident they don't need me. What is my role? Giving advises, half the times they prefer listening Kenny and his stupid computer…

I wonder if I won't leave the team at the tournament end. This is only some days before the finale, if I don't feel I have my place here, I would go away.

To Be Continued…

The following is written in French, if you want a quicker translation, let me a nice review, and if you are fan of this pairing, please write fanfiction about them !!!

Carine^^