Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Fox Thief ❯ Hyper-active thief ( Chapter 1 )
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: lostsun 
lostsun: Here's my first story so I hope you like it.
Sesshy: What's it about?
lostsun: -_- You didn't read the summary?
Sesshy: I didn't think I had to.
lostsun: -_-+ It's about a thief.
Sesshy: Oh, do I have to read it?
lostsun: Yes, you're my koibito so you should read it.
Sesshy: ...Fine...
lostsun: ^_^
A girl was jumping through the trees as fast as she could. She was being chased by the ANBU. She was at a young age but already one of the most wanted thieves around. They threw shuriken and kunai at her only for her to easily dodge. �Ha, ya missed!� She shouted at them looking over her shoulder. She made some quick hand signs and whispered, �Shunshin no Jutsu.� She disappeared completely making the ANBU stop and look around. They decided to go back to their village noticing how close they got to Konoha which was of course not their village. They turned around and started towards their village. �Aw man, they gave up already?!� The girl said.
She had sandy blonde hair that went to her shoulders. She had some of it in a ponytail while the rest hung loose, her bangs to short to be put in the ponytail. Her hair was somewhat messy but she really didn�t care. She had brown eyes. She wore a deep brown tight shirt with a shirt that looked similar to a kimono but with short sleeves and was a light turquoise and the edging on where the shirt opened up was a very light violet over it with light turquoise shorts that went to her knees (similar to Sasuke�s) and black zori.
She jumped out of the tree she was in and looked around. �Alright you can come out Star.� She said. An elegant black fox with white paws and white at the tips of her tail, ears, and snout stepped out of some bushes. She also had a white chest and a white marking on her forehead that looked like a diamond. Her full name was BlackStarLight but the girl called her by Star. ~It�s about time you lost them.~ Star said to the girl telepathically. �Well I wanted to have some fun.� She answered. ~How about we get to the next village and get a hotel room?~ Star said in sounding more demanding than asking. �Ok!� She said jogging to catch up to her since she had started to walk away.
They had managed to get past the gate and by the guards and were looking around. Konoha was a peaceful village. They heard a splash of water but noticed there wasn�t enough water around to make that big of a splash. �I think that came from this way.� The girl said walking towards the sound. Star sighed and followed her.
They sat up in a tree and saw some Genin�s fighting what looked to be their sensei. They noticed that one of the boys tried to grab a bell from his sensei while attacking him. �Oh, so that�s what they�re doing, training.� She said. She jumped out of the tree and headed towards the sensei. ~What do you think you�re doing?!~ Star yelled at her only to be ignored. The girl quickly ran by the sensei and stopped a few feet away from him. All of the Genin�s and sensei turned to look at her. She held up one of the bells by the string and stuck her tongue out smiling, �Is this all you had to do? That was too easy!� She said. Everyone was shocked, even the sensei, who definitely wasn�t expecting this to happen while he was training his Genin. Star sighed and laid down to watch knowing that they most likely weren�t going to attack her. The sensei was the first to speak, �Um, mind telling us your name?� He asked. She frowned, �A person who asks for someone�s name should introduce themselves first.� She said. �Oh, right. I�m Hatake Kakashi, a Jonin of Konoha.� He said. She nodded and looked to the Genin who had all walked over. �This is Haruno Sakura, Uzumaki Naruto, and Uchiha Sasuke.� Kakashi said pointing to who the name belonged to. She nodded and smiled, �That�s better. I�m Matoke Riku! Nice to meetcha!� She said. Star decided it was about time for her to walk over to Riku. She got up and ran over to her running past Kakashi and stopped next to Riku. Everyone stared down at her. �Oh, and this is my friend, BlackStarLight but you can call her Star!� Riku said. They nodded. �She�s a�unusual color.� Sakura said. Naruto nodded. Riku ignored her comment, �Can you tell me where a hotel is?� She asked. Kakashi had explained to her where the hotel was and she thanked him and ran off, Star giving them a last glance and running off to catch up with Riku.
Riku of course had money but a hotel room cost more than she expected. She walked around looking at the villagers and when she saw a man who was busy talking to a girl she quickly walked past him grabbing his wallet without anyone seeing except for Star. She went around the corner and opened the wallet. �Jack pot!� She yelled. The guy had tons of money, 11,445 yen ($100.75). �Awesome, the guys loaded!� Riku said. ~WAS loaded.~ Star said with a smirk. �Got that right.� Riku replied.
They headed back to the hotel making sure to get a good room but not spending a lot of the money on it. Riku jumped on to her bed landing on her stomach, �Aaaahhh, a nice soft bed. Haven�t slept in one of these in soooo long.� She said grabbing a pillow and hugging it; she was practically in heaven. ~You better get some rest. We have to go pickpocket someone again and go shopping tomorrow.~ Star said jumping on the bed. Riku sat up, still hugging the pillow, and looked at her. �You know Star, we�re in a hotel room, you don�t need to stay in that form.� She said tilting her head to the side a little. ~Alright.~ Star said.
She started to transform and when she was done she looked human, well except for the fox ears and tail but she could easily hide them when she wanted to. She had midnight black hair with white at the tips and it went to her shoulder blades. Her eyes were gold, the same as her fox forms. She wore a loose sleeve less shirt, white pants, and black zori. She still had the diamond on her forehead but her bangs, which went to her brows, covered it up and instead of it being white it was black. Her ears and tail were the same. She looked the same age as Riku, 13.
�There, happy?� Star said. Riku nodded, �Yup! Your clothes still look weird to me though.� Star got an anime vein, �Riku, my clothes have to look somewhat similar to my fur but not enough to tell I�m your fox.� Riku tilted her head some more, �But with your hair like that it kind of gives it away.� Star tensed a little. She turned her back to Riku and ignored what she said. She could her Riku laugh a little. �Well, let�s have some food and go to bed.� Star said standing up and walking over to Riku�s backpack (yeah, I forgot to say she had a dark green backpack, sorry). There wasn�t a lot of food in it since they had eaten most of it already. She got out a pack of instant ramen and found a pot and put hot water in it and set it on the stove. When the ramen was done she put it in two bowls and gave one to Riku who happily ate it. �Star, your ramen is the best!� She said. Star looked at her, �No, it�s just that you burn it every single time you try to make it.� Riku had already finished her ramen, �That�s why I have you make it!� She said. Star rolled her eyes and finished her ramen. It was a medium sized bed but since Riku liked it so much she took up most of it so Star had to go back into her fox form to sleep on it.
lostsun: That�s it for the first chapter! Review and tell me if you liked it!
Sesshy: What are they?
lostsun: You have to read to find out my koibito.
Sesshy: -.- Do I have to?
lostsun: Yes.
Sesshy: -_-+
lostsun: Now I�m hungry. Let�s get something to eat.
Sesshy: That was random.
lostsun: I know now lets go. Oh, bye and review!
Sesshy: Is there going to be more info in the next chapter?
lostsun: Yes, now let�s go! *drags Sesshy away*
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Shounen / Shoujo / Comedy / Adventure / Action | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 07.11.2006 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.7K | Visits: 319 | Status: Work In Progress
lostsun: Here's my first story so I hope you like it.
Sesshy: What's it about?
lostsun: -_- You didn't read the summary?
Sesshy: I didn't think I had to.
lostsun: -_-+ It's about a thief.
Sesshy: Oh, do I have to read it?
lostsun: Yes, you're my koibito so you should read it.
Sesshy: ...Fine...
lostsun: ^_^
A girl was jumping through the trees as fast as she could. She was being chased by the ANBU. She was at a young age but already one of the most wanted thieves around. They threw shuriken and kunai at her only for her to easily dodge. �Ha, ya missed!� She shouted at them looking over her shoulder. She made some quick hand signs and whispered, �Shunshin no Jutsu.� She disappeared completely making the ANBU stop and look around. They decided to go back to their village noticing how close they got to Konoha which was of course not their village. They turned around and started towards their village. �Aw man, they gave up already?!� The girl said.
She had sandy blonde hair that went to her shoulders. She had some of it in a ponytail while the rest hung loose, her bangs to short to be put in the ponytail. Her hair was somewhat messy but she really didn�t care. She had brown eyes. She wore a deep brown tight shirt with a shirt that looked similar to a kimono but with short sleeves and was a light turquoise and the edging on where the shirt opened up was a very light violet over it with light turquoise shorts that went to her knees (similar to Sasuke�s) and black zori.
She jumped out of the tree she was in and looked around. �Alright you can come out Star.� She said. An elegant black fox with white paws and white at the tips of her tail, ears, and snout stepped out of some bushes. She also had a white chest and a white marking on her forehead that looked like a diamond. Her full name was BlackStarLight but the girl called her by Star. ~It�s about time you lost them.~ Star said to the girl telepathically. �Well I wanted to have some fun.� She answered. ~How about we get to the next village and get a hotel room?~ Star said in sounding more demanding than asking. �Ok!� She said jogging to catch up to her since she had started to walk away.
They had managed to get past the gate and by the guards and were looking around. Konoha was a peaceful village. They heard a splash of water but noticed there wasn�t enough water around to make that big of a splash. �I think that came from this way.� The girl said walking towards the sound. Star sighed and followed her.
They sat up in a tree and saw some Genin�s fighting what looked to be their sensei. They noticed that one of the boys tried to grab a bell from his sensei while attacking him. �Oh, so that�s what they�re doing, training.� She said. She jumped out of the tree and headed towards the sensei. ~What do you think you�re doing?!~ Star yelled at her only to be ignored. The girl quickly ran by the sensei and stopped a few feet away from him. All of the Genin�s and sensei turned to look at her. She held up one of the bells by the string and stuck her tongue out smiling, �Is this all you had to do? That was too easy!� She said. Everyone was shocked, even the sensei, who definitely wasn�t expecting this to happen while he was training his Genin. Star sighed and laid down to watch knowing that they most likely weren�t going to attack her. The sensei was the first to speak, �Um, mind telling us your name?� He asked. She frowned, �A person who asks for someone�s name should introduce themselves first.� She said. �Oh, right. I�m Hatake Kakashi, a Jonin of Konoha.� He said. She nodded and looked to the Genin who had all walked over. �This is Haruno Sakura, Uzumaki Naruto, and Uchiha Sasuke.� Kakashi said pointing to who the name belonged to. She nodded and smiled, �That�s better. I�m Matoke Riku! Nice to meetcha!� She said. Star decided it was about time for her to walk over to Riku. She got up and ran over to her running past Kakashi and stopped next to Riku. Everyone stared down at her. �Oh, and this is my friend, BlackStarLight but you can call her Star!� Riku said. They nodded. �She�s a�unusual color.� Sakura said. Naruto nodded. Riku ignored her comment, �Can you tell me where a hotel is?� She asked. Kakashi had explained to her where the hotel was and she thanked him and ran off, Star giving them a last glance and running off to catch up with Riku.
Riku of course had money but a hotel room cost more than she expected. She walked around looking at the villagers and when she saw a man who was busy talking to a girl she quickly walked past him grabbing his wallet without anyone seeing except for Star. She went around the corner and opened the wallet. �Jack pot!� She yelled. The guy had tons of money, 11,445 yen ($100.75). �Awesome, the guys loaded!� Riku said. ~WAS loaded.~ Star said with a smirk. �Got that right.� Riku replied.
They headed back to the hotel making sure to get a good room but not spending a lot of the money on it. Riku jumped on to her bed landing on her stomach, �Aaaahhh, a nice soft bed. Haven�t slept in one of these in soooo long.� She said grabbing a pillow and hugging it; she was practically in heaven. ~You better get some rest. We have to go pickpocket someone again and go shopping tomorrow.~ Star said jumping on the bed. Riku sat up, still hugging the pillow, and looked at her. �You know Star, we�re in a hotel room, you don�t need to stay in that form.� She said tilting her head to the side a little. ~Alright.~ Star said.
She started to transform and when she was done she looked human, well except for the fox ears and tail but she could easily hide them when she wanted to. She had midnight black hair with white at the tips and it went to her shoulder blades. Her eyes were gold, the same as her fox forms. She wore a loose sleeve less shirt, white pants, and black zori. She still had the diamond on her forehead but her bangs, which went to her brows, covered it up and instead of it being white it was black. Her ears and tail were the same. She looked the same age as Riku, 13.
�There, happy?� Star said. Riku nodded, �Yup! Your clothes still look weird to me though.� Star got an anime vein, �Riku, my clothes have to look somewhat similar to my fur but not enough to tell I�m your fox.� Riku tilted her head some more, �But with your hair like that it kind of gives it away.� Star tensed a little. She turned her back to Riku and ignored what she said. She could her Riku laugh a little. �Well, let�s have some food and go to bed.� Star said standing up and walking over to Riku�s backpack (yeah, I forgot to say she had a dark green backpack, sorry). There wasn�t a lot of food in it since they had eaten most of it already. She got out a pack of instant ramen and found a pot and put hot water in it and set it on the stove. When the ramen was done she put it in two bowls and gave one to Riku who happily ate it. �Star, your ramen is the best!� She said. Star looked at her, �No, it�s just that you burn it every single time you try to make it.� Riku had already finished her ramen, �That�s why I have you make it!� She said. Star rolled her eyes and finished her ramen. It was a medium sized bed but since Riku liked it so much she took up most of it so Star had to go back into her fox form to sleep on it.
lostsun: That�s it for the first chapter! Review and tell me if you liked it!
Sesshy: What are they?
lostsun: You have to read to find out my koibito.
Sesshy: -.- Do I have to?
lostsun: Yes.
Sesshy: -_-+
lostsun: Now I�m hungry. Let�s get something to eat.
Sesshy: That was random.
lostsun: I know now lets go. Oh, bye and review!
Sesshy: Is there going to be more info in the next chapter?
lostsun: Yes, now let�s go! *drags Sesshy away*
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Shounen / Shoujo / Comedy / Adventure / Action | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 07.11.2006 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.7K | Visits: 319 | Status: Work In Progress
Fox Thief
Hyper-active thief
A girl was jumping through the trees as fast as she could. She was being chased by the ANBU. She was at a young age but already one of the most wanted thieves around. They threw shuriken and kunai at her only for her to easily dodge. “Ha, ya missed!” She shouted at them looking over her shoulder. She made some quick hand signs and whispered, “Shunshin no Jutsu.” She disappeared completely making the ANBU stop and look around. They decided to go back to their village noticing how close they got to Konoha which was of course not their village. They turned around and started towards their village. “Aw man, they gave up already?!” The girl said.
She had sandy blonde hair that went to her shoulders. She had some of it in a ponytail while the rest hung loose, her bangs to short to be put in the ponytail. Her hair was somewhat messy but she really didn't care. She had brown eyes. She wore a deep brown tight shirt with a shirt that looked similar to a kimono but with short sleeves and was a light turquoise and the edging on where the shirt opened up was a very light violet over it with light turquoise shorts that went to her knees (similar to Sasuke's) and black zori.
She jumped out of the tree she was in and looked around. “Alright you can come out Star.” She said. An elegant black fox with white paws and white at the tips of her tail, ears, and snout stepped out of some bushes. She also had a white chest and a white marking on her forehead that looked like a diamond. Her full name was BlackStarLight but the girl called her by Star. ~It's about time you lost them.~ Star said to the girl telepathically. “Well I wanted to have some fun.” She answered. ~How about we get to the next village and get a hotel room?~ Star said in sounding more demanding than asking. “Ok!” She said jogging to catch up to her since she had started to walk away.
They had managed to get past the gate and by the guards and were looking around. Konoha was a peaceful village. They heard a splash of water but noticed there wasn't enough water around to make that big of a splash. “I think that came from this way.” The girl said walking towards the sound. Star sighed and followed her.
They sat up in a tree and saw some Genin's fighting what looked to be their sensei. They noticed that one of the boys tried to grab a bell from his sensei while attacking him. “Oh, so that's what they're doing, training.” She said. She jumped out of the tree and headed towards the sensei. ~What do you think you're doing?!~ Star yelled at her only to be ignored. The girl quickly ran by the sensei and stopped a few feet away from him. All of the Genin's and sensei turned to look at her. She held up one of the bells by the string and stuck her tongue out smiling, “Is this all you had to do? That was too easy!” She said. Everyone was shocked, even the sensei, who definitely wasn't expecting this to happen while he was training his Genin. Star sighed and laid down to watch knowing that they most likely weren't going to attack her. The sensei was the first to speak, “Um, mind telling us your name?” He asked. She frowned, “A person who asks for someone's name should introduce themselves first.” She said. “Oh, right. I'm Hatake Kakashi, a Jonin of Konoha.” He said. She nodded and looked to the Genin who had all walked over. “This is Haruno Sakura, Uzumaki Naruto, and Uchiha Sasuke.” Kakashi said pointing to who the name belonged to. She nodded and smiled, “That's better. I'm Matoke Riku! Nice to meetcha!” She said. Star decided it was about time for her to walk over to Riku. She got up and ran over to her running past Kakashi and stopped next to Riku. Everyone stared down at her. “Oh, and this is my friend, BlackStarLight but you can call her Star!” Riku said. They nodded. “She's a…unusual color.” Sakura said. Naruto nodded. Riku ignored her comment, “Can you tell me where a hotel is?” She asked. Kakashi had explained to her where the hotel was and she thanked him and ran off, Star giving them a last glance and running off to catch up with Riku.
Riku of course had money but a hotel room cost more than she expected. She walked around looking at the villagers and when she saw a man who was busy talking to a girl she quickly walked past him grabbing his wallet without anyone seeing except for Star. She went around the corner and opened the wallet. “Jack pot!” She yelled. The guy had tons of money, 11,445 yen ($100.75). “Awesome, the guys loaded!” Riku said. ~WAS loaded.~ Star said with a smirk. “Got that right.” Riku replied.
They headed back to the hotel making sure to get a good room but not spending a lot of the money on it. Riku jumped on to her bed landing on her stomach, “Aaaahhh, a nice soft bed. Haven't slept in one of these in soooo long.” She said grabbing a pillow and hugging it; she was practically in heaven. ~You better get some rest. We have to go pickpocket someone again and go shopping tomorrow.~ Star said jumping on the bed. Riku sat up, still hugging the pillow, and looked at her. “You know Star, we're in a hotel room, you don't need to stay in that form.” She said tilting her head to the side a little. ~Alright.~ Star said.
She started to transform and when she was done she looked human, well except for the fox ears and tail but she could easily hide them when she wanted to. She had midnight black hair with white at the tips and it went to her shoulder blades. Her eyes were gold, the same as her fox forms. She wore a loose sleeve less shirt, white pants, and black zori. She still had the diamond on her forehead but her bangs, which went to her brows, covered it up and instead of it being white it was black. Her ears and tail were the same. She looked the same age as Riku, 13.
“There, happy?” Star said. Riku nodded, “Yup! Your clothes still look weird to me though.” Star got an anime vein, “Riku, my clothes have to look somewhat similar to my fur but not enough to tell I'm your fox.” Riku tilted her head some more, “But with your hair like that it kind of gives it away.” Star tensed a little. She turned her back to Riku and ignored what she said. She could her Riku laugh a little. “Well, let's have some food and go to bed.” Star said standing up and walking over to Riku's backpack (yeah, I forgot to say she had a dark green backpack, sorry). There wasn't a lot of food in it since they had eaten most of it already. She got out a pack of instant ramen and found a pot and put hot water in it and set it on the stove. When the ramen was done she put it in two bowls and gave one to Riku who happily ate it. “Star, your ramen is the best!” She said. Star looked at her, “No, it's just that you burn it every single time you try to make it.” Riku had already finished her ramen, “That's why I have you make it!” She said. Star rolled her eyes and finished her ramen. It was a medium sized bed but since Riku liked it so much she took up most of it so Star had to go back into her fox form to sleep on it.
Fumi: That's it for the first chapter! Review and tell me if you liked it!
Sesshy: What are they?
Fumi: You have to read to find out my koibito.
Sesshy: -.- Do I have to?
Fumi: Yes.
Sesshy: -_-+
Fumi: Now I'm hungry. Let's get something to eat.
Sesshy: That was random.
Fumi: I know now lets go. Oh, bye and review!
Sesshy: Is there going to be more info in the next chapter?
Fumi: Yes, now let's go! *drags Sesshy away*
Chapter end