Shaman King Fan Fiction ❯ Christine Weathers: Just another shaman ❯ Chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )

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I want critique on this one, I will not be mad if someone gives me some. So don't second guess me then post my fanfiction on some LJ community all “This is a sue why won't they stop were only doing this behind their back. They need to do this or that” When I can't see what I need to do it doesn't help me.

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Christine dose act a bit Mary-sueish in the first chapter but that is only because she thinks acting like that will make people like her and stuff.

I'm also working on my writing style… it needs help XD

A lot of this is a redo of an old fanfiction of mine what was repotted for being script and taken down when it was never in script… bad grammar and spelling yes (I intend to edit) but it was by no means in script to whom ever was dumb enough to put in a fake report…

REALLY find something wrong with the fanfiction if you want to see it go and the something wrong should be something true.

Ok so on with the fiction!

So who's next” said Silva

“Christine Weathers!” answered a voice

“All right I know why you are here. To enter the shaman fight. Am I right?” said Silva

“Not exactly” said a girl who had just walked out of the crowd of shamans.
She had dark blue eyes. Long limp blond hair pined in to a ponytail. With a blue shirt, a dark blue cloak and blue jeans She walked up to Silva but tripped causing the crowed of shamans to bust out laughing. She stood up very fast blushing a bit.

“And what exactly would you mean?” asked Silva

“Well I was wanting to have a private conversion with you and some of the representatives of the shaman fight.” said the girl

“You will have to make it quick. As you can see we have quite a lot of hopefuls,” said Silva motioning to the bunch of shamans.

The crowd of shamans looked very disappointed as Silva walked in to a tent with the girl.

”I wander if this has something to do with the shaman fight,” whispered one shaman

“I bet she's getting free credit,” said another

“She is probably related to someone in the comity.” said a shaman smugly

”So why have you come?” said Golva

“Well, I guess I should start with my name. I am Christine Brittany Weathers and I am 13 years old. I have come here to ask if it is possible for a shaman to enter under the possibility of keeping the peace.”

“Keeping the peace?” said Golva questionably

“in other words if I was to enter the shaman fight with no intention of winning just to make sure that Asakura Hao can harm no more people." said Christine

“Well we already have that taken care of as you can see we have the officials to do such a thing,” said Golva

“Well not to inquire that any thing is being done wrong, but let's say that the officials can not always be there. As in past shaman fights there were those that would kill others before their appointed fight just to win.” said Christine

“I see where you are going.” said Silva

“True, but what can you do about it?” said Golva

“I can be your informant on Hao Asakura.,” said Christine

This really got the attention of every one that heard. There was a brief moment of slice before Christine spoke up and said.

”I am here to make sure that Asakura can kill as few as possible by tracking him.”

“True it would come in handy.” said Silva

“But are you prepared?” asked Golva

“Prepared for what?” said Christine

“Well for one thing you do realize that you could be risking your life. And by not participating in the shaman fight you could be giving a life time opportunity.” said Silva

“Well I quite do understand and am ready for any thing and everything.” answered the girl

“All right then can you come back in a week, so we can get in to the details.” said Golva

“Yes!” said Christine standing up to leave

“You do know you could have the potential to win?” said Silva

“Yes, but I am here for so much more.” said Christine before walking out and in to chatting crowd of shamans who still had no idea what was going on

As she walked off she only made is a few yards before Drotoro one of her ghosts popped out of no where screaming his head off at her.

“CHRISTINE! Why on earth did you turn him down?”

“You know I have my reasons.” said Christine a bit quite looking at her feet she knew Drotoro had a temper but she hated when he yelled at her, she understood why however he had just wanted to be great.

“R-REASONS YOU DO KNOW THAT WE COULD WIN THE FIGHT AND BE SO GREAT! YOU COULD GET BACK AT THE REST OF YOUR FAMILY AND MAKE YOUR PARENTS PROUD!”

“DON'T YOU SNAP AT CHRISTINE-SAMA!” yelled Koncho yet another ghost Koncho was very protective over Christine

“Let's not get in to this tonight.” Christine said she didn't feel like hearing them argue.

“Yes Drotoro, it would be nice if you would lay off.” said a ghost named Manny

“Yes both of you, I don't think Christine needs another reminder of her past?” said Elizabeth another ghost

“Really, you know just what to say!” said Koncho sarcastically looking at Drotoro and Manny smugly before Elizabeth glared a bit at him

“Would all of you stop? I mean it is bad enough I have to use all those big words back there. .” Said Christine joking “Elizabeth it's nice of you to worry but you don't have to the past is the past there's nothing I can do to change it so I should just live for tomorrow”

“But Christine why not join the shaman fight? With your body and my soul we could be unstoppable” said Drotoro

“Gee Drotoro you're power hungry.” said Koncho in a mocking tone

“Well… for one I'm probably not the best person for the job, and I really feel like it'd be a bad idea for me to enter… besides I need to do what I feel I should do and that's keep Hao from hurting others… don't know how well I'll do but no harm in trying right?” said Christine

“If it's what you feel you need to do then I'm behind you every step of the way.” Elizabeth said

“Great! ok I'm ready to head back to the hotel now it's getting late.” Christine said

“Yes and I can hunt the third floor!” said Manny happily

“You know Manny, most ghosts don't travel around hunting every place they stay the night.” said Christine

“Yeah but you know me, I love to hunt anything and a hotel is just perfect, oh if only you liked to hear the screams like I do!” said Manny
Christine let out a laugh before saying

“You know, why don't I just get mini fridge for you to hunt? It would be cheaper and, maybe the hotel owners wouldn't think every place I go will have the costumers driven off by a rampaging ghost that follows me.” she laughed a bit It was a bit hard to find a place to go since she had ghosts following her around so whenever she found a hotel to stay at she tried hard to stay put.

“Yeah every one would say BEWARE, BEWARE of the hunted fridge!” said Koncho

One week later

”Hurry we're going to be late!” said Manny watching Christine run back and fourth in the hotel room looking for her hair brush she had managed to misplace yet again.

“I know I know!”

“Why can't you use your fingers? said Drotoro

“Cause, if I do that I will have to wash it again then I would have to use my fingers then wash it again then use my fingers again then...” she was cut off by Koncho

“We get it!”

“woohoo, I found it let's go!” said Christine

“So have you rehearsed your big words?” asked Elizabeth

“Yes and I can certainly say with the greatest provision that I will be prepared… So how was that?” said Christine

“Ha, ha, ha, perfect you're like a walking dictionary!” said Koncho

“Great!” said Christine

“Hey, why do you have to use big words any way?” asked Drotoro

“I don't know but it seems to impress them… I hope it dose.” said Christine

So after a little bus ride Christine got to where Silva had said to meet him

”He should have appeared by now.” said Christine checking her watch but realizing it was broken

“Please don't use big words till you have too.” said Koncho

“What, dose it hurt your 3,000 year old brain?” said Elizabeth

“Well I see you made it here in one piece.” said Golva

“You have no idea.” said Christine with a slight laugh.

“Well you seem to know lots about us but we know little about you.” said Silva

Bio

Name: Christine Brittany Weathers

Age: 13

School: her laptop online classes with a little thing called the internet.

Lives: mostly in hotel rooms.

Sprits: 4: Koncho, Manny, Elizabeth, and Drotoro (NO she cannot oversoul them all at the same time her main spirit is Koncho she uses him often but she uses Elisabeth when she thinks she will come in handy same with the others.)

Blood type: she doesn't know...

Act: She is somewhat dumb by herself and Ghosts but when around people she will TRY to act smarter/better than she really is. She is average power wise.

Ok please leave a review I would like to see some CC rather than flames and if there's any mistakes please tell me.