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| "FAKE in Love: Act X; Set-ups and Power Plays" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2013 16:25 EDT
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Oh I loved this act!! (Even though it was a bit of an anti-climax after the shooting, but I forgive you that). What a funny coincidence to read about Dee taking care of a sick Ryo while I'm sick myself at the moment! That was really nice. I wish I had Dee's constitution, but I'm more the Ryo-type when it comes to catching a cold :D The last lemon was especially amazing! I loved how you somehow set them back in time and let them revive the "Test Drive". I'm looking forward to the next installment! (P.S.: It's funny to read how you were waiting for the next Harry Potter - I'm a great HP-fan myself and I remember how anxiously I was always waiting for the next book when I was a kid. Speaking of traveling back in time! ;D ) | Reviewed By: Twisted Clover On: September 24, 2006 01:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished Act X I am so in to the stories you write very well the stories are not boring and they are not needless Lemons you really incorporate the love that is between Ryo and Dee and their jobs well they are mixed perfectly the way its written everything is great I give it an A+ I love it and look forward to reading the rest that you have posted so far as well as any future ones you plan to make
| Reviewed By: nme On: July 16, 2005 04:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fics! I'm new to the FAKE fandom, but your stories are what drew me in! I don't normally review, but I like your series so much that I had to. Few authors are as dedicated in updating and refusing to lead on an audience with evil WIPs as you are. I'm halfway through your series, but so far I have enjoyed your imaginings of all the characters, especially Rio. It was so refreshing how in the first story he *spoiler* escaped by himself, rather than wait for Dee to rescue him. I also like the relationship between Bikky and his surrogate it's very sweet and just as enjoyable as the relationship between the two leading men. Also, your stories are plotted in a way so that I can imagine it to be practically manga canon, with enough action and humor to balance out the romance. Anyways, that's about it. I hope you keep writing, I intend to be checking regularely for updates! ~Naomi PS: I'll be reading Harry Potter, too.
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 03:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful work. I can't wait for the next Act.
| Title: Left Speachless As Usual
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was a great surprise for me. I just came back from vacation from Washington and to see this act out so early was wonderful. This was a really good one too. I liked the idea how a lot of scenes made it like traveling to the past. That last lemon though, I can so imagine that as their first time. Well done! I've been at a lose of words lately. Don't know really know what else to say except for the basics. Great plot, good lemons, very good characters, and excellent style of writing. Can't wait till your next update! You're my favorite author and I love all the work you create! Good luck with your future fics Lisa! Great job on this fic!!!
| Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 11:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic yet again! It totally made my week to open up my email and see another of your fics had been posted! Sexy, funny, with a great case to solve... they are perfect! Poor Rose at the party though! HaHa! That girl was so not for him! I don't know why, but the more I read your fics, the more I long for him to hook up with JJ... I guess it's just that I feel sorry for them. And ya know, they could really be a kinky couple! ^_~ Great work once again! I always look forward to more!
| Title: Twists and Turns Like A Rose Garden...
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And Just As Beautiful... Speaking as the SOMEBODY, GD, can I just say, yet again, you have managed to create a piece of fiction that was well crafted, beautifully worded, lush and imaginative. While this last arc may have beenone of your shorter ones, it had so much going on and covered so many different topics. From Ryo getting sick and De's feelings of protectiveness, to Bikky, in his own way, showing how dear his family is to him, to Dee stopping and examining his life as a cop, to a new crime syndicate being formed, and finally to Dee and Ryo revisiting old milestones in their relationship. So much happened here, and as always, you did it with a grace, maturity, wit and sensuousness that never ceases to amaze me as a reader. I absolutely ADORE your work, and am so excited whenever a new Act comes out. It feels almost pointless at this point to comment on your lemons, but once again, whether you had our favourite cops f*cking or rediscovering their love for each other through their bodies, your lemons never cease to continually fascinate, titillate and make my heart ache. Your grammar, spelling and craft as a writer as always was dead on, as well as the way you manage to keep both our boys very masculine and in character. BRAVO!!! And THANK YOU SO MUCH for a slice of 4th of July heaven! As always, I eagerly await your next update. XO, BlueSimplicity
| Reviewed By: Na (draechaeli) On: July 05, 2005 11:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great ficcy. Although I kinda wish there would be someone for JJ (I'm a JJ/Drake fan). Well you've got to write more with this whole Vones thing! ~Na
| Reviewed By: no one On: July 04, 2005 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay yay yay!! you updated!! you're my favoritist author ever!! this is my favorite fanfic series for fake. keep updating!!
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