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"Daa! Daa! Daa! in my version!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ]
 Title: thanks
Reviewed By: radhika best  On: October 04, 2005 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
thanks for reviewing my fic and updating this fic!!! pls. update more and pls focus more on miyu and kanata than chelsea.
 Reviewed By: 4cherryblossoms [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 24, 2005 00:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update please update please update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats all!!!! p.s. update!!!!!!!!! ^_^
 Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever  On: September 21, 2005 07:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow! that's so nice. and yeah, it's nanami not minami. well anyway, i still got your point. are there going to be more chapters? it's cool! i wanna know what will happen when they wake up! hehehe :D
 Title: nanami
Reviewed By: radhika best  On: September 21, 2005 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
the name is nanami not minami , well it does not matter , keep updating
 Title: keep it up
Reviewed By: radhika best  On: September 19, 2005 07:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi ! cheesy girl . thanks for updating . read my fic too but as a beginner i don't think you'll like . it's pretty short at the moment though i'll update it soon . the name of the fic is !Miyu and Kanata! = Love .please read it and review and update
 Title: long time no write?
Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever  On: September 17, 2005 22:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice! i cant wait for the next chapters! keep writing!!!! :D
 Title: update?
Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever  On: August 21, 2005 01:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
y arent u updating ur story? i really as in REALLY wanna know wat will happen next (i know iknow pipol i say dat to all the fics i reviewed but really, im just curious of wat will happen next so, pls update ur stories guys!) update naman dyan! hehe dats all 4 now...
 Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever  On: August 06, 2005 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh btw, if ur a friendster user pls add this. miyu_kanata@ufobaby.com tnx. note: for ALL fans of daa! daa! daa! and each character. tnx.
 Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever  On: August 06, 2005 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
ur story is good. it has potential as the others say. i agree with that. but lengthen it. and dont squeeze it into one paragraph. yup, maybe you could try writing it like a script frm wat emZi said. so im looking forward to your updates. thats all! bye! update pls!
 Reviewed By: satsuki [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2005 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
hi there! as past reviewers said your story has potential but i suggest that you don't squeeze all the words and sentences in one big paragraph. i like the story but make it a longer. alright?! i'm looking forward to your next update :)
 Title: ThankS!!
Reviewed By: MW  On: July 06, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're story is good but it's pretty short, please lengthen your chapter it's a great story though. :D PS. I Think you over exaggerate my fic it's not that good though but I promise I'll make another one starting today.
 Reviewed By: ichigo kai  On: July 06, 2005 17:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Try using spaces in between dialogues. Just don't type em around in one paragraph. Check other fanfics for ideas on how to write a story properly. And don't make one chapter too short, those 3 chapters can fit just one ü
 Title: comments
Reviewed By: emZi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2005 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
the story, the way i see it, has potential. The plot though seems to be organized in a mambo jumbo, u might want to consider taking into consideration the flow of the story because it is very confusing. And since you are not planning, i gather, to be particularly descriptive of the story, why don't you write scripts instead..? e.g. Miyu: Darn Kanata!(fumes as stress marks appear)-- that sort of thing. Also, don't hold back your ideas just because u didn't receive the expected feedback. Just keep on writing. You'll never know how long a good idea would last. :)

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