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| "Rika's Bad Day" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Bakea/Henrika Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect! Just perfect! Even though I support Henry and Rika, that as just perfect! Well, everybody is not perfect. . .But it's just a saying. Rika did have a bad day. And I thought that Rika/Takato would never make a great couple, but this story somehow made me. . .Please make more fics! I still support Henrika thought. | Reviewed By: Flamegaruru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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FG: Yeeeessshhh.. I hope this works ^.
Ruki: I ALWAYS have bad days! >.~
Takato: Good thing I was there to make it better!
Ruki: Control yourself. -_-'
I suppose you are wondering about the rating, hmmm? If not, let's pretend you do!
First of all, this fic is really funny and original! Very cute, especially with the Rukato!
SUGGESTIONS: I would make this into paragraphs because it is pretty hard to read. You have minor spelling mistakes, but who cares?
I believe people would find this more interesting if you did the paragraphs, but overall, I enjoyed this very much!
Keep in mind that this is NOT a ~flame~! I hate flames!
Good job!
~Flamegaruru~ | Reviewed By: Impmon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2001 06:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, it's OK. Sounds like Rika really did have a bad day. Just one note: Rika went to an all girl school and never went to the same school (Odaiba Elementary) as Takato and Henry did. |
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