| "Völuspá" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 04:43 CDT
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How come you havent written anymore? Has it finished? Or is there more? Cause if there is I really want to read it. I think that Roy should get Ed back. Though Ed seems like he doesnt care as much as Lust, isnt that only because he believed that Roy took him for granted? Just using him for sex and nothing else. Isnt Ed angry because Roy never said anything about feelings? I dont know, but its really good and keep writing! Please? :-)
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Reviewed By: Eboni On: September 25, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing is very profoessional, so far I've seen no spelling errors, and I'm not one to correct anyone elses grammar. This is a very original storyline, and I enjoy reading it. I haven't found many decent FMA fics, and I'm glad someone suggested this one to me. I love the hooks in the last chapter. I thought Roy had made Lust as well...I mean, it's Lust! Edward being alive threw me too. How can you make a humoncoli for the living and it seems to have some scattered version of Edwards memories. And... Now that Edwards back... I think Roy has a better chance of sticking with Lust. I think Lust really cares for him, though he's annoying as hell. Great story and I hope to see more!
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 10:30 CDT
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i can only imagine who they are talking about.....i need to know what happens next.....please hurry and update as soon as you can.....keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 21:06 CDT
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the story is really good....i need to know what happens next......please hurry and update as soon as you can......keep up the good work
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Title: Voluspa
Reviewed By: mary harmon On: September 19, 2005 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems to be an original story line. Not the same plotless drivel we see over and over. Excellent writing style and vocabulary. I feel like I'm reading something that expects their reader to have a brain. Very interesting plot twist. Please finish.
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Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: July 26, 2005 17:18 CDT
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this is so cute! does ed come back? please let him come back.. en isn't it envy? I mean envy is more or less a "he" and he can change his apperance? not? anyways it is really good keep going!
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Reviewed By: Sand3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kept going 'What? Oh. Ngh. Huh? Oh! Wait... huh...' and it was good. I had no idea where you were going until you got there, and that's awesome. It's a good fic.
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Title: so...ed's dead rit...
Reviewed By: thenotsologedinccam3 On: July 10, 2005 21:44 CDT
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...does he ome back? oh, good stuff...
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