Title: GREAT JOB!!!
Reviewed By: Ed's girlfriend On: July 21, 2005 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really LOVED youre story!!! Even though I love Ed, Al turns out to look very cute whe he has his body back and you made a good job making the AlXWinry relationship belivable. Juts though you should know that Al is actually one year younger than his brother and Winry. besides that you did an excelent job. ^______^
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