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"Vegeta's Top 10 Rules for Dating His Daughter" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ]
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 Reviewed By: WhiteXRose [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2004 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was good. Sounds like Vegeta so much! You should do something like this with another character! -WXR
 Reviewed By: autumn  On: July 10, 2002 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was SO funny! My favorites:
“The following places are not appropriate for a date with my daughter: … Places where there is dancing, holding hands, or happiness.”

“I have two hands, a shovel, and five acres behind the house. Do not trifle with me.”

Great stuff!
 Reviewed By: Lee_Chan  On: May 12, 2002 10:54 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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LOL!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO FUNNY! I HAVEN'T LAUGHED THIS HARD IN ABOUT A WEEK!!!! LOL THIS IS DEFINETLY THE HIGHLIGHT OF MY DAY!!!
 Reviewed By: emeraldiris  On: March 30, 2002 04:29 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol lol lol lol lol .... *gasps* I can't stop...laughing... lol
 Reviewed By: Cowgirl_6_26_87  On: March 26, 2002 19:20 CST
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LOVED IT!! That is SOOOOOOOO Vegita! The rules do get a little strict, but hey, that's Vegita!
 Reviewed By: Kandy  On: March 22, 2002 15:14 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
If I was a male, I would have to keep that in mind. Thank God I am not. I am glad my daddy isn't crazy like that. This very funny.
 Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2002 03:47 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hilarious! If that´s not Vegeta, than nothing is. I could just hear him grinf the words into some poor boys face!
 Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 01, 2002 20:05 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
as the parent (abet step-parent) of a teenage daughter, I have recited these rules on more than one occasion. I laughed my ass off seeing them applied to Vegeta. I don't think he'll need the shovel though, a quick blast of ki should inncernate them to nothing more than ash. lol
 Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 29, 2001 15:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
ROFLMBO! This is exactly what my father would say! lol. And people ask me why I don't have a boyfriend! lol
 Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 29, 2001 07:46 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NOW THATS HOW TO WRITE A COMEDY!!!!!! i haven't seen a good comedy fic in ages!Well done u! :)
 Reviewed By: Felidae  On: December 29, 2001 05:22 CST
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This could totally happen! I actually think that he is doind this with Bra's dates. So cool and funny! I so can see him telling the poor boy those rules!
 Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 28, 2001 16:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This is quite amusing! I wouldn't be surprised if Vegeta DID do something like that!
 Reviewed By: thecod [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 28, 2001 16:24 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that's awesome! hope you do another one
 Reviewed By: Sailor Libra  On: December 28, 2001 14:02 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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THIS WAS WAS ABSOLUTE GENIUS!
Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 28, 2001 11:19 CST
Comment/Review:
It was really funny, but I happen to know that you just put in names and changed some descriptions from a chain e-mail that's going around.
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