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"FAKE in Love: Act XI, New Faces and New Developments" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ]
 Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 08, 2013 17:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
Again a very nice read with lots of fun, romance and suspense. I still think Drake belongs to JJ and Diana belongs to Rose (when will that poor guy finally get a partner, anyway?), but well, it's your story ;) I wonder how long it will take Erin to realize he doesn't have a chance with Ryo :D Now that Rose has given up on chasing him, we need a new candidate, huh? ;) Oh, and have I ever mentioned that I really like Jamie? Well, I do. Yay for strong female characters! :D Now let's just hope Bikky won't come home soon and discover the mess that our two wasted boys made... haha xD Aaaaand I'm off to the next Act! See you there! ;)
 Title: It's Always The Simple Things...
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2005 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
GD - What a beautiful, short work of fiction with our beloved characters. This latest Act may have been brief, but once again it was filled with so many little wonderful moments. Dee and Ryo making lasagna, or seeing Bikky off to camp. JJ asking Dee about how he knew when the time was right with Ryo. Ryo having "the talk" with Bikky. This last story was filled with so many of these sweet little treasures. But, once again, you had very intense, very powerful moments as well. Vones killing Makkel, Makkel's son killing himself. For me, the strongest element of this last Act was perhaps how, more than any of your previous acts, this was a series of "A Day in the Life of..." You see Dee and Ryo going about their daily business, worrying about their car, their kid, taking care of and comforting each other. It was lovely and necessary. (I had always wished for more of that from Sanami herself, so it was wonderful to see.) Your lemons in this last Act were brilliant too. I love the twist you give of while perhaps Ryo was physically the top in one of their encounters it was still Dee who controlled the situation. It had the fluidity, grace and intimacy that most real life relationships do, all the while being very very very SEXY. I'll just say it again - You write the BEST sex scenes I've ever read, laced with a real emotional context. As always BRILLIANT and WELL DONE. I look forward to whatever you have in story for us next. XOXOX - BlueSimplicity
 Reviewed By: BigD17VBall  On: July 20, 2005 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What an amazing writer! Sorry I haven't reviewed you, but I love your writing. The stories that you put Ryo and Dee are so creative. I can't wait for the next part to come out (literally, i can't).
 Reviewed By: Misslady (not signed in)  On: July 20, 2005 02:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
OK this was another great fake story!!! I like how you tied in the Carol and Bikky thing with the gang!!! Wonderful!!! I sooo look forward to reading more of these by you!! I have read them all so far and am waiting(impatiently) for the next one. I understand that it takes a while to get a good story done!!! Please keep up the great work!! Misslady
 Reviewed By: NME  On: July 20, 2005 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Ryo. Dee, Rose, Vones, and now Erin. Not to mention half the psychos in NYC. That man is just too pretty for his own good. Well, more fun for us, eh? I read this out of order by accident but it didn't stifle my enoyment. Please write more! Please?
 Title: Another Masterpiece!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2005 00:31 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Lisa, once again u've mangaged to create a work of art from start to finish. As my favorite fanfic author, I knew u wouldn't dissapoint me. This story was wonderful. Now we enter deeper into the Vones chapter and we still haven't solved it! Plus that new Erin guy, I really don't trust him...Wonder if he has something to do with Vones? Well next story will let me know maybe, right? Plus he better keep his hands off Ryo! He's Dee's man after all! ^^ Dee won't be too happy when he finds out ne? Anyway, loved this story. The lemons were very well written. Loved the drunk Ryo. U're right. He is more fun when he is drunk! ^_~ Oh yeah, almost forgot. I loved the parts with Bicky and Ryo. It gave me that warm feeling. They have a great father/son relationship and u write it out so well. Oh and we can't forget Dee. With the three of them together, they make the perfect family! ^^ Last but not least, great plot as usual. Always entertaining! I can't wait til the next FAKE Act! Hope it comes out real soon! Hope u are enjoying ur Harry Potter book too! Keep up the great work! Until next time, Ja Ne!
 Reviewed By: smirnoff19  On: July 19, 2005 03:33 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AMAZING AS ALWAYS
 Reviewed By: paraluman  On: July 19, 2005 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YES.
 Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 18, 2005 06:05 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Once again a great job. Though Erin seems a little dense to be a detective. Oh, and when is Rose gonna get any. I never would have thought that JJ would get laid before Rose. LOL, just teasing. In other news, dawn came at 6 am that morning, along with a serious case of talk to me and die. This is why the gods created AMP. I can't wait for the next Act. CYA

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